My only gripe with this story is that we aren't really seeing much of Naruto's personal development. It'd be great if Kushina could figure out a way to teach Naruto to mold his chakra into the chakra chains like she does in addition to him learning the Hiraishin. Granted I've always wanted a fic where Naruto learned to use the chains at a young age and grew proficient with them.

I have greatly enjoyed this so far and hope to see a new chapter soon.

Love, love, love this story! Absolutely amazing details and story line. I found this story awhile ago and couldn't stop reading it! I could barely contain my excitement for every chapter. I honestly can't wait for you to upload a new chapter because I need to see how this story continues and ends. Your an amazing writer and hopefully there's a new chapter soon )

Awesome story so far

Damnit! Why does everyone give naruto a goddamn cape? I mean seriously, he's not minato

Just curious, but did kushina not really see naruto as a demon at all but it is danzo using the kotoakatsumi? I'm sure ill find out and I'm probably wrong but I thought it might be a possibility and an interesting twist

I thought you already made shikamaru a chunin, and hinata too. Why are they competing?

There is no arterial spray from the jugular as it is not pressurized, you are talking about the carotid artery which is also located in the neck. Just for future reference

Isn't Kakashi still in the village? Why would tsunade send shikamaru and some genin after Sasuke when the night before he proved strong enough to use the chidori multiple times as well as just violently assaulted sakura? No logic there

Can't they use the kirigakure jutsu? Why does he use all that chakra to make shadow clones just to dispel them for cover when he can make super thick mist? Doesn't make sense to me

You are a GENIUS! I don't know why water users are my favorite, but that includes zabuza and you made him a konoha ninja! I love it!

Dame was not exspecting that...

Returning to the leaf such a buzz kill saratobi is a badass in battle but he could never keep a tight grip on his village and made so many mistakes with naruto. On the plus side at least naruto isn't a dumb as fuck loser like in cannon. Oh well story is still good and I shall continue to read

Aww leaf village sucks don't go back :(

Epic tale though a little bit reliant on the cannon material with a handfull of variances but thats what FF is afterall. I love how you've developed the characters thus far even the seemingly minor ones have a great amount of detail put into them beyond what I have come to expect from most stories here. Looking forward to more in the future.

It was a good read. Actually if there's any alternative story out there for Naruto then I guess I've read one of the best. I loved how you carefully built up the story and its characters. I do hope that you find time to finish this piece as I would love to know how the ending turned out.