Dame was not exspecting that...

Returning to the leaf such a buzz kill saratobi is a badass in battle but he could never keep a tight grip on his village and made so many mistakes with naruto. On the plus side at least naruto isn't a dumb as fuck loser like in cannon. Oh well story is still good and I shall continue to read

Aww leaf village sucks don't go back :(

Epic tale though a little bit reliant on the cannon material with a handfull of variances but thats what FF is afterall. I love how you've developed the characters thus far even the seemingly minor ones have a great amount of detail put into them beyond what I have come to expect from most stories here. Looking forward to more in the future.

It was a good read. Actually if there's any alternative story out there for Naruto then I guess I've read one of the best. I loved how you carefully built up the story and its characters. I do hope that you find time to finish this piece as I would love to know how the ending turned out.

Is the story complete or abandoned ?

I just love this story so much, it is my favorite on the site hope you update this soon as I cannot wait

Getting interesting

KEEP it up nice job

Starting to be very interesting

You know, every time I read the words "Mr. J" I keep thinking the Joker... Probably on account of a Naruto/Batman x-over i read where the Joker raised Naruto...

Any how, still loving the fic, on to the next chapter

This is an incredible story, keep up the great work!

This is an incredible story, keep up the great work! So who is going to be the root for Tsunade, Dan or Nawaki?

I liked the scene with naruto and kurama.

HAHAHA oh he did do it... again.

Actually there are atleast one fic out here that makes shion "jump" him after hes remark, however it was pretty easy to hear that it was said partly in jest from her side in the movie.