Reviews for Naruto: Demon's Path
GrumpyGrue chapter 25 . 1/8
"As soon as the ships dock, we'll board her,"

Umm...they are talking about the ship right? A vessel is that is about to be filled with sea men? About 150?

"There are only a select number of places they could have gotten off and still arrived at the port when about when we expected them to. (Snerk)

Looking at the carnage he added, "Also we're going to need more men."

Well of course they're going to kill some men! That's way too many to include in the shoot, even if she is the "Snow Princess."

Sasuke doesn't deserve to have something almost sounding like "sass" in his name. I hear that it's pronounced like "sauce", but that would just be lamesauce. Lame duck...butt. Because sass implies coolness. He should be named sucky, not sass-sucky. Unless it means he's sucky at sass.
Fanfic Reader Guy chapter 64 . 1/2
I finally caught up to the story and I got to say its one the best Naruto stories I've read. I look forward to the next chapter and see what else happens!
Chpapter 32 chapter 32 . 11/27/2014
Anonymous chapter 20 . 11/27/2014
You might want to know that it is not I.T department but T.I department (Konoha Torture and Investigation Force)
Guest chapter 19 . 11/26/2014
Some thing I want to say as I'm halfway through the 19th chapter
keep changing Naruto's power he was weak vs assume then he kicked Garra's ass
3. Is its a Sakura x Naruto I will kill you
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 37 . 11/23/2014
Thinking about Haku and his coming from a family of assassins, once Naruto becomes Hokage he can make Haku his primary problem solver. Sending him off to take care of problems, and if all else fails killing them. Like Danzo for the 3rd Hokage, except with Haku, Naruto knows that there was no other solution.
NiteDragon91 chapter 64 . 11/14/2014
this is one of the best fanfictions out there, more so with its epic length. only wish it could be continued and finished
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 64 . 11/3/2014
Seriously, this is a great piece of work, and I hope that you start writing again! Thank you!
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 58 . 11/3/2014
LOL the Chibi-Jiraiya rising again was icing on a very lovely cake!
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 53 . 11/2/2014
LOL Explosive lovers vs. explosive lovers! Hopefully more "words" will be exchanged about who is the real explosive expert!
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 45 . 11/2/2014
Hilarious match with Hanabi!
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 44 . 11/2/2014
Interesting on who you put in charge of the Black Market! Nice to see Gaara's development to Kage too in the eyes of the powers that be in Suna. Have to admit your point here that given the revelation of Sage mode, Jiraiya's insistence that Naruto learn to use Kurama's power seems to have been needlessly dangerous. Going to the mountain where he could safely master Sage mode and be strong enough to handle the Akatsuki, and THEN learning to master being a jinchuuriki seems safer
Forgot to say how sweet/cool/hilarious your choice for Haku's summons was! "Okay, boys, time to level this enemy village!"
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 32 . 10/31/2014
Like the teacher scenes with Anko, and the concern Zabuza shows for Naruto ("Vandals in MY kid's apartment!?"). Change with Lee's attire interesting too
Nice piece on Yuago, especially regarding Sand. Something else that gets overlooked.
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 31 . 10/31/2014
Nice point about Sasuke never being shown putting any training into actually, you know, learning how to hunt down a missing nin who had not been heard of for years. He needed a team to do that, and even then Itachi was basically guiding him. And if Itachi had not joined an organization that had a mandatory dress code or structure that could be traced...
Anko is an...interesting mother figure with Kin
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 30 . 10/31/2014
Really like that confrontation with Ino, something that was missing from cannon given how she was overlooked and how that should have changed her. Shino stayed upset about not going, but Ino was just a wallflower here :-P
Also like the Anko scene, especially accusing Kin of being a rebellious teen LOL
Appreciated the conversation between Naruto and Shikamaru too, took a serious look at what life as a shinobi is like, without getting as dark as some other fics
Nice ominous twist with Kushina
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