Reviews for Naruto: Demon's Path
CMVreud chapter 10 . 7/17/2014
What a twist, but why so lighthearted.
Where's the grimdark? I want my Fury!Hinata back.
CMVreud chapter 8 . 7/17/2014
Mou, and here I hoped for some grimdark.
Perhaps next chappie.
CMVreud chapter 6 . 7/17/2014
Go, go, Fury!Hinata!
CMVreud chapter 5 . 7/17/2014
Damnit, I want BlazingFury!Hinataaaaaa!
CMVreud chapter 4 . 7/17/2014
Oh, dear Kami, please let them encounter Tsunade, even if I only want to see what dynamic Tsunade and Zabusa would create.
CMVreud chapter 3 . 7/17/2014
hmmmm, YamiHinata anyone?
CMVreud chapter 2 . 7/17/2014
Kumo Grills?
I pray that you make a "One does not simply walk into Ame!"-joke somewhere down the line.
Or fisticuff like gentlemen with Kisame, or encounters with mounted lions, or a Tobi-friendship-is-magic, kunai-to-the-knee townguards that couldn't become shinobi, or a do-you-even-XXX between Kisame and Gai, or a Doge Kiba (or Akamaru for that matter), perhaps a rule34 on Jiraya's Icha-Icha books, a Dovahkin Pain, or a "It's over 9000!1" with Hinata, a "divide by zero" Shikamaru, or a vengeance dad/techno viking Zabusa, a desu Haku, or a Leeroy Jenkins Sakura, or wing-boners for Konan...
CMVreud chapter 1 . 7/17/2014
Interesting start.
Also: Hundred dollar bills of ryo. Sorry, but :facepalmplz:.
Guest chapter 64 . 6/11/2014
It's been almost 17 months without an update when you said one update a month. Would you kindly update soon? Please?
Guest chapter 22 . 6/10/2014
LMFAO I LOVE ZABUZA! "I take cash." Oh god, so funny. And W.W.Z.D.? Genius. He's just so funny. Just finished ch 22, great story!
EurekaSeven21 chapter 49 . 4/18/2014
My good sir, never have i found a story so intriguing that i was propelled to blast through 64 excellently paced chapters in only 3 days. This story has so much unique descriptions to give the readers very vivid pictures. The best part of all is you have succeeded in where most fanfiction writers on this site often come up lacking in; making each character their own and fully fleshed out. Characters who are so believable that you can't help but actually imagine the things their doing, such as Naruto fleeing from an angry Zabuza telling him how it will be quick and painless, to which Naruto responds "I know the killing will be quick, its the being permanently dead thing that bothers me!" Moments like those i could actually imagine happening in the actual series. (Can't say how hard i laugh that i almost fell off my chair.)

However that's not all you succeed in. You managed to take a premise that was no doubt done time and time again, but instead of turning it into a typical cliche story you managed to spun a wonderful story showing how one small change can become a very big one in the grand scheme of things as well practically re crafting the world and settings through your unique use of adjectives and descriptions (Seriously the Mist chunin exams were bloody brilliant) My only hope is that fact that i will be able to continue to read this wonderful fic to its full conclusion. You have my most utter respect.
all forms of fluff chapter 21 . 3/4/2014
I don't know why but the first two times I read this story it was fun and ingaging. Now however it seems repetive. Most of that might be to reading the first part twice before but some of it is rehashing of cannan and finding a way to make it fit into the world you have going. I guess what it comes down to is that I don't want to plow though the first fifty chapters to get where I was at before. However I have gotten bored with the story so I don't really want to just skip to that chapter. SO I am going to back burner this one for a while. It is a good story, and I have enjoyed the way your telling it. So untill next time I would just like to say Thank you for the story.
jsk chapter 64 . 1/30/2014
I guess you really shouldn't have tried for that one chapter a month thing, that can really discourage a writer, maybe try two months, any way I really hope you come back to this story if you're able, it is one of my favorites.
firelordozaie chapter 64 . 1/2/2014
whew, that took me almost a week to grind through from the start.

Interesting take on the Naruto-verse thusfar, though I have to say I generally find the humor in it rather dry.

This something-or-other that possessed Hinata concerns me, there are some divergences from the original work that I have no problem with... Randomly introducing otherworldly beings with no basis in it from the original sources has traditionally been the easiest way for authors to cross that line in my experience.

It isn't a death-knell itself, but I hope there is a good reason for it, and that it keeps the story interesting.
IIonezerozero chapter 64 . 12/31/2013
Your story is awesome, really wish you come back to work some more on it. Hope your job gets better and whatever you're doing right now. DON'T GIVE UP!
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