Reviews for Temptation
silvereyedbitch chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
I verily enjoyed this "point of view" type writing you've done here. Thank you for the different presentation of their growing attachment. I found it quite beautiful actually.
xx chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
Just so lovely! And the perspective is very good, I bought it line, hook and sinker!
atlantis chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
Loved this, too! Very, very nice!
saya chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
So lovely! I almost cried because of the fullness of emotions in it!
loreen chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
Loved this very, very much! It's really great and I had to go back and read ANB over again. How well you keep Gerald in character, I very well can imagine he would be thinking something like this, that inner monologue of his. I can only hope you keep writing such jewels and give you my best pleading eyes!
saris chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
O my! That's so sweet and I like this switching back and forth of lovesick talk and colder thoughts in Gerald's inner monologue! Love it!