Reviews for The Tyrant and the Captive
Kuro Erie chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
i feel sad after reading this.

But also happy.

Lots of Love,

Kuro K. Erie
Nutssy chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
I feel so sorry for Chris at the end he was picturing something so totally different only to see they were hugging and kissing and who knows what else. you know you should write another one on what happened afterward.
S chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
Absolutely amazing and unique. Such a great poem to go with the story. Please continue! I'm curious to see how Chris will react!
Naoko Mint chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
Wow what a change of pace! The hate turning straight into love. Just wow.

The ending is a bit confusing, trying to understand this embrace. You mean just hugging? or..she's nakeds? Or something else?

It's great though leaving it open to the imagination! ;)
aleatoire726 chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
you should continue the story. it really is great :D
AdaWongTN chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
It'll be great if you continues this story 3 I liked it so much! I want to see what Chris will do XD
Ultimolu chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
I could imagine Chris committing suicide now...seeing what he's seen right now.

I'm curious, if the poem has nothing to do with the beginning, then why use it? :/

It sounds better without the poem, to be honest.
Tiger Snaps chapter 1 . 11/27/2009

Does that sum up what i think, if not well i think its absolutely brilliant, this is amazing
The Jabberwock of OZ chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
My my Sesshy

look at what you made...

i defidently love this new piece you wrote

small but very satisfying

the ending...was alright not to satisfying but it still works

the end feels like it needs to be continued

but i think it is better off not finished

actually in my mind it is

it just needs the watches ideas to further it

the ending may not be written

but i CAN be thought up by the many on this site

well Tata until you write some more
moonbeam1987 chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
i liked the poem. what a shame for poor chris seeing what he saw. having to tell leon would probably be the next hardest thing he will have to do after what he saw. i liked this and the ending was ok i wouldnt worry about it. good job keep it up XD