|Reviews for My Everything|
| Ridley Silverlake chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
That was horrible, what Natsume did to Mikan. Stupid Natsume. D:
I love this. I love how you wrote it; I could really feel Mikan's love, the sincerity and all. :)
A sequel would have been nice though.
Keep writing! :)
| scarletjj27 chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
Does this have a sequel
| Ayusa chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
heheh xD gets a kiss you say but i honestly wish that i kan be the one who gives it to him :D
btw the story's just perfect... for some reason a hope ypu;ll change the "one-shot" thing and make it longel... i'll be glad to read it ;)
| aurora0914 chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
Can you please, please please make a sequel?
| asdfghjklnatsu97 chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
yes please! a sequel would be cool! :) anyway, this is different. but great! :)
| HamanoAyumu303 chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
I loved this story so much!
| shie0917 chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
YES! please write a sequel! we need a stronger mikan to make him regret! )
| PandaLove22 chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
we all want a sequel !
lolol awww come on make a sequel where natsume will get hurt and regret he didnt take what was right infront of him, make him sufferrrrrrrr ! ( even though i do love him ) i just love mikan even more and i dont like reading about her getting hurt without making anyone pay. I know im a cruel woman, and yes indeed i do believe in sweet revenge. And this is a great plot with sooooo much potential and for it to be a teasing one-shot is such a waste -.- usually i only read one-shots that are like sweet and fluffy mikan and natsume moments so when i read this one i was like :O "ohhhhh no girlll dont you leave me hanging hereeeee" anyways great plot you have awesome imagination, just please dont let this plot go to waste and make a sequel, pretty please :)
| lovesaakura chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
just 30 kisses?
come on viewers, write up!
though you already marked this as completed
i still would like a sequal though
cuz you know what?
your stories are awesome
| Kaede Minami chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
SEQUEL! SEQUEL! I WANT A SEQUEL!
| diamondpetals18 chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
sequel sequel! sequel:))
| Billkeily chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
| kuroainii chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
's a good one though it ended up on not a good ending..ohh i really want a sequel to this coz it's like this story is kinda
| ashley chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
i really like this one shot is was way to short but you conveyed what you need to in so few words story was great hope to read a sequel from you soon if you do one please email me at
good luck in your written
| pwenie chapter 1 . 5/19/2011