I love it and I want more of Charlie and Carlisle

Aw, this was real cute.

NOOOOO! I want more business so good i almost feel like crying because theirs no more chapters i know right but write more please

I usually don't do it, because i always respect the author's idea, but I really think you should continue this... I'd really like more of them!

Please add more to this story, it sounds like it needs more chapters, it was best fanfiction I have read in few months. so pretty please add more chapters (I love Carlisle and charlie fanfiction)

Omggg. I LOVED this one-shot!
I didnt expect too.
You should turn this into a short story!

keep going

Awh, I guess your not continuing the story, but it was a great start!

This is a really cute fic. You got me laughing at Charlie's new wife commment. That was hilarious. Are you planning on doing more of this kind? Because this really has potential.

Best Carlisle and Charlie fic ever! Hardly any smut, yet I wanted to keep reading on and on, please tell me ypu've got some other great stories of these guys? or at least more Twilight fics?

Right. I love Carlisle, I love slash and I love weird pairings, yet somehow I doubted this would work. Beause . . . really? Charlie/Carlisle? But ohmygosh it was PERFECT! Carlisle's little insecurities, Charlie's confusion, that slow, deliberate seduction - it played out beautifully, and I like that it ended where it did, it seemed natural and fitting. Most of all I loved your characterisation, they finally had depth and humanity and personality which SM never thought to provide. So thank you ever so much for writing because I thoroughly enjoyed it!

Oh my gosh . . . where to begin . . . .

Well first I SO fucking loved this story, it's insane.

I WANT IT SO BADLY to continue. I'm not above bribery . . . what do you want? Money? Sex? Drugs? Mr. Pattinson? You name it, it's yours!

Ok . . . I'm not crazy . . . promise.

So I've always been a Carlisle girl. Seriously. He's the only reason I even cared enough about the books to try and read them and the reason I watch the movies and stick around in the fandom. So I did a Carlisle slash search and found this little ditty.

Now at first the pairing threw me off, quite a bit. And then when I saw that it was Charlie's POV I really hesitated. In the book I sort of hated him. Billy Burke makes him better in the movies, but book Charlie was a POOR excuse of a character and father. How he let Bella rot away for months without doing anything or seeking help for his daughter [New Moon] drove me bonkers. So obviously my love for him runs deep.

BUT what you've done here was just perfect. You gave him SO many dimensions that we just don't see in the actual books. And even though this was SO far from canon it had such a canon feel to it, down to his choice of words to his mannerisms. I really felt like THIS was the real Charlie. SM got it wrong. WOW, just wow. You did such justice to your character . . . which is REALLY hard to do when said character will do something SO far from believable of their own characterizations.

That's a VERY hard task accomplish and you deserve TONS of praise for it. To make a character like Charlie, give him an EVEN more canon and realistic feel than SM could do and yet still make this situation believable is HUGE. Words fail me. They do . . . lol . . . even though I've written you some paragraphs here. I just can't begin to explain the level of talent and skill and understanding of your own characters it takes to pull something like this off . . . and that's why I was SO hesitant at first.

I honestly didn't think it could be done . . . who could be THAT talented to 1) make me actually care to enjoy Charlie's POV and 2) put Charlie in this situation and make it work. BUT NOT ONLY THAT make it work and make it believable.

Gah . . . I just loved it. I did . . . everything about it. The awkward revelation moments, the small comic riffs, the hesitant glances the the SEXUAL TENSION . . . oh lordy the sexual tension.

I LOVED it, the slow burn, the build up . . . the way it lingered and even when it wasn't "there" it was ALWAYS "there."

And I personally LOVE that they didn't "get it on" it goes back to the characterizations that I mentioned and the believability too. That would have tipped the scales in a direction that wouldn't have been believable for the character you created and I LOVE that you didn't give in and go there . . . that you stuck to what felt right for your characters, now what gets the "votes" or what we all want to see.

AND I'D be lying if I said I didn't want to see that . . . I totally do . . . which brings me back to the thesis of this here review . . . WHAT DOES A GIRL GOTTA DO TO GET YOU TO CONTINUE THIS? Huh? huh? Eh? eh?

I don't even care if Charlie and Carlisle DON'T get back together . . . because that's a VERY really possibility, I just wanna watch it play out.

Do you ever get involved in Fandom Gives Back? You think I joke!

Hehe . . . ok all yoking aside . . . I LOVED this. I LOVED THIS SO MUCH.
And I read your profile and I wasn't privileged enough to read your other work, but SLASH definitely is your niche . . . I'm glad you found it, or it found you, whatever the case may be. Don't stop you have a talent, an immense talent and I for one and SO impressed and excited to see what you do with that skill of your dearie . . . .

xxNaya

they should have went forward and that was not rated m that was t or something

We need more C&C lovin'! This one shot was amazing and we need more! I truly hope you do turn this into a chapter story. So hot!

Thanks!

And here I thought mine was the only Carlisle/Charlie story in existence! I'm so happy to find another one. I enjoyed it, though it's too bad they didn't wind up together in the end.

Carlisle gave me a meaningful look with a subtle hunger behind it. He must really like his veggies.-this line cracked me up. Charlie would be so dense.