Reviews for Fate Under Moonlight
KP100 chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
Great job! Think you can make a Danny and Sam return? It'd be really cool!
Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 1 . 3/3/2010
Great story. This would do well under Romance and Tragedy as well.
FangsTrashcanOfDoom chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
I liked it, though difficult to read.

Try different paragraphs every time a different person speaks. An example (I'll use my favorite and everyone else's favorite part):

“First to see mayor masters then we are going to the cops.”

“Why the cops?”

“To turn in a murderer.”

“ME!”

“No Jack me, for killing Vlad for all the pain he has caused!”

See how much easier it is to read?

Just a helpful tip :)

(I still like the story though :D)

~Trashcan
anonymous chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
I love the end:

"Where are we going Maddie?”

“First to see mayor masters then we are going to the cops.”

“Why the cops?”

“To turn in a murderer.”

“ME!”

“No Jack me, for killing Vlad for all the pain he has caused!”
dpunhealthobsession chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
“ME!” “No Jack me, for killing Vlad for all the pain he has caused!”

I know this fanfiction wa supposed ot be serious but I busted out laughing at that.