Reviews for Naruto: Rosario Kitsune Rewrite
HeartlessAlpha chapter 2 . 6/11/2018
*facepalm*

Suuuure...
Forgive the girl who put you under a love spell, nearly force you of rape, made you into an asshole to your only friend and almost enslaved you as her toy for all eternity.

Because, you know, that's what a LOGICAL and RATIONAL person would do.

Good god man...
Tsukiko K chapter 1 . 12/11/2017
I never really liked Moka. Her excuse for the Blood sucking thing gets on my nerves. Every damn time, it's the same thing! If someone treated me like a juice box I would be pissed and say, "A friend isn't supposed to suck another's blood!" I honestly wish more characters blocked her from biting them(especially the nonhuman ones - even if thru half human, I doubt their blood would be as appealing as it sounds.) Honestly, though it may seem cruel, Moka could get blood from blood bags or something. At this point, she just seems like a blood whore, with how she jumps on a character to take blood without their permission. I'd push her off immediately and ask her if she was raised without manners.
draco7347 chapter 2 . 2/1/2017
love story cant wait for new chapters
crimson night214 chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
hurry up on making more chapters dammit it has been the same god damn number of chapters for years so hurry with the rest dammit I want to see more cause I have seen entire magna series get more chapters done faster than this.
Residenthobo chapter 2 . 12/22/2013
Weeellllll…...

On one hand, I actually like this story.
But on the other, it and things similar enough been done countless times before and I can't really enjoy it as much as I feel I could…

Which makes me sad, I mean here you are, spending your time writing things for some reason and you get told that someone doesn't really like it. That's gotta suck, and I AM sorry about it, but... eehhhhh…

/( 3)/
Ah what the hell, I'll give you a favorite for effort, and because coming out with a whopping 30k words in two chapters is pretty badass and must've taken considerable effort on your part.
Angels will bleed from pain chapter 2 . 10/21/2013
You must continue this story!
powermachine79 chapter 2 . 2/20/2013
Great story hope to read more soon :)
Zobx chapter 2 . 12/12/2012
More chapters please
darkloveeden chapter 2 . 12/7/2012
i hope you continue this story
The Engulfing Silence chapter 2 . 1/19/2012
A nice chapter. I like how you are doing things different with Naruto around while still keeping things that would have happened regardless of him being there the same.

One thing I think you should take note of is that you have quite a few grammatical errors. Nothing major, but the ones you have stand out quite a bit, namely that you tend to miss and add unneeded words when writing. For example:

"Naruto gave a nod before he gently lifted her up in a bridal carry, making sure her head was resting comfortably on his the while as he carried her home, Kurumu looked at him with pure longing in her eyes."

This sentence is missing a word here - making sure her head was resting comfortably on his the while as he carried her home - you also added several words that don't need to be there. I believe you were trying to say - making sure her head was resting comfortably on his shoulder while he carried her home - meaning you need to get rid of the 'the' between 'his' and 'while' and the 'as' between 'while' and 'he'. Be sure to check over your story and make sure to fix these problems.

Other then that this is a very good story. I do hope it doesn't take as long to update this time as it did the last time.
The Engulfing Silence chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
Ok. This was awesome! A good, detailed story where we get to see what the characters are thinking, descriptions of the physical world they live in and character movement.

I just hop it doesn't take you another year to update.
Who Knows chapter 2 . 12/31/2011
It's great. Keep the chapters coming.
Cupitor chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
Interesting, though I hope no harem here. But I wish you'd continue your "Naruto: Claymore Number 48" work (
Random Techno Dragon Q chapter 2 . 10/4/2011
More please.
RElarax chapter 2 . 9/26/2011
Sexy Story.
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