Reviews for Puppet Strings
DangoDaikazaku chapter 7 . 12/31/2012
update soon please!?
wolfawaken chapter 7 . 4/14/2012
Are you every going to update this? Would not asking if this was no good
Cloud chapter 7 . 1/1/2011
Update! I love it! Happy new year
D chapter 3 . 6/29/2010
The dream in this chapter is particularly well-done - the imagery of the garrote-like puppet strings, the altered eyes, the sense of conflict and regret with "I pulled his strings too tightly." The angle of an internally conflicted Sephiroth who wants to control Cloud but doesn't quite want to subsume him (and who has warring instincts, with Jenova's voice clashing against the more and less sane bits of his personal desires) - this has a lot of potential, if you work it well.
dawn chase chapter 7 . 4/11/2010
The eager readers await

I'm 13 and I will not judge but I love your story
heartattack chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
That was awesome! You really have a way with writing, good job! :3
xEpIcxXxfAiLx chapter 7 . 2/8/2010
Huh... It's definitely interesting, though I'm not a fan of either of these yaoi pairings. By the way, you have just recieved the first review I've ever given for a yaoi. Heh, now if this were a younger fic of Genesis and Sephiroth, I would be mucho interresant. ;D Still good though, I like the basis of puppet strings.
natcat5 chapter 7 . 1/27/2010
This story is so INTENSE. I absolutely cannot wait to see what happens next!
Clockwork Phoenix chapter 7 . 1/25/2010
Great chapter. Looking forward to the next. _
DreadPirateSephy chapter 7 . 1/24/2010
Ok, so I can see why Genesis would feel a little betrayed... that's understandable... but still, if you can't go out in style, kissing Sephiroth isn't a bad second at all... I rather think it's preferable. :) Very awesome and (sorta) fluffy chapter! I wouldn't worry about "content" either. I read a few romance novels, and a lot of slash fiction of the more mature variety when I get bored with homework, and so far so good. I would recommend, for future and more... er... steamy... scenes, if you want accuracy, make sure there's lube. There are flavored ones, too, if you want to spice it up. ... Wow... it's kinda sad I know that... and that I know it because it's a frequent dinner conversation with my friends... well, anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :)
Safe to Sway chapter 7 . 1/24/2010
On the edge of my seat! Poor Tifa...why is it that I don't really feel all that bad for her? ;p Great chapter!
Dragi chapter 7 . 1/24/2010
poor genensis, i wnoder what will happen when cloud and sephiroth meets, gues i only got to wait and see :)
Dragi chapter 6 . 1/21/2010
hmm i wonder how cloud and sephiroth will meet. i wonder if cloud will be given any choice to keep his friends safe from getting in the way for sephiroth to claim him. and i wonder if cloud do want to be together with sephiroth. atleast now he knows sephiroth is out there, and after him to claim him. update soon plz i wanna read more :D
Safe to Sway chapter 6 . 1/21/2010
Waiting ever so patiently for the next chapter! Great job...update soon!
Clockwork Phoenix chapter 6 . 1/21/2010
Great chapter. I liked that Genesis and Zack were in it.

And sleepy Cloud is so cute. _

Looking forward to the next update.
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