Reviews for This Is Not My Life
ThuGoldenChild chapter 10 . 1/28/2010
Loved this chapter!
Jolinar-nrw chapter 10 . 1/28/2010
Thanks for the update.
HateDecidingUsernames chapter 10 . 1/28/2010
really cant wait for part two... i am kind of partial to those since i love little lily... keep the amazing work up!
Nolebucgrl chapter 10 . 1/28/2010
Interesting chapter. Edward learned quite a bit more about Bella. Jake's a jerk, always good in my mind. hehe I'm glad Tanya didn't get to give some teary interview as well.
Jasveen chapter 9 . 1/27/2010
great chapter but i do hope they find them soon
nuanprong chapter 9 . 1/27/2010
this story is great. i came across it as a rec from another story "how to save a life"...

I just hope lily(abby) doesn't have to endure too much trauma...so she'll be able to recover. poor bella..with the drugs and getting beaten..horrible.
Robpfan chapter 9 . 1/27/2010
Well Isa... (please let me know if this shortened version irks you)

I came upon this story during one of my many searches through fanfic, and I can honestly say that, for a first time story, you are amazing at this...

This is very eye opening... many things can happen to a kidnap victim and you are showing us just a small portion of the horror that happens, on both sides... especially with such an unstable person...

And the fact that she knows they may have to go to therapy, and she still trys to get Lilly to remember who she really is, all the while being tortured and doped up herself, is truly wonderful...

And Edwards family, and Bellas, the tortureous thoughts and feeling guilty for being happy for even a second, blaming themselves, snapping at loved ones... everything is great

I am looking forward to reading more of this story... hopefully in the near future, but I'm a mother of 4 so I'm realistic too...

Take care and keep up the great writing

Brenda
JB30 chapter 9 . 1/26/2010
That was a tough chapter to read but very well writen. I like how strong and tough both Lily and Bella are and how sweet they are together when they talk in bed and share stories and sing. I hope they get out of this awful situation soon. I look forward to your next chapter.
VeThena chapter 9 . 1/26/2010
When I got the alert of the the story I was so scared because I knew we were back to Bella and I was afraid of the torture James would put them through, so I had to put it off. LOL, that was cowardly of me but in my defense I was having a crappy day and I needed happy, not darkness. But this chapter was really good because you half of it was sweet and lighthearted and half was a bit scary not knowing what that shithead was going to do. So thanks, I'm still scared though, not gonna lie but the story is too good to abandon. You don't get this kind of story on fanfiction, ever.
mummyanimal chapter 9 . 1/26/2010
OMG! im a little speechless! Absolutely loving this story, Lily is adorable! Cant wait for more x
jlou10dun chapter 9 . 1/25/2010
omg good story. scary and nerve wracking yet I can't help but want more
mudpuddledemon chapter 9 . 1/24/2010
Great chapter. Really looking forward to the next one.
krazykla chapter 9 . 1/24/2010
Wow Lily is so brave. I wonder about those pills though, hopefully they wont cause long term damage for Bella. And I cannot wait to know what's going on in the outside world! Update asap!
ol2bob chapter 9 . 1/23/2010
oh my gosh.. I hope they are found soon! I'm very worried for BElla... then again.. this is also VERY traumatizing for a child... I wnat her to be reunited with her daddy soon
gettoglasses chapter 9 . 1/23/2010
I am definately going to go crazy waiting for the next chapter. You are telling this story so well I can picture it in my head perfectly. The way you portray Edward's pain and Bella's terror is so realistic! I was actually crying by the end of both chapters! Great job :)
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