Reviews for This Is Not My Life
Jillybeans122 chapter 9 . 1/21/2010
Oh my gosh! What a fantastic chapter! I think it's pretty hilarious that James can't get it up, and very lucky for Bella. Bella put the broken glass in the garbage, she should try to take a broken peice of it during her cleaning, and somehow use it to stab James in the neck with it, he could bleed to death, she can get the keys and they can get out of there! I'm addicted to this story, it's like opening a present when you've updated! And I'm so curious to know if her and Lilly will somehow escape, or will the police come to the rescue. Too bad Bella can't go to the bathroom after she takes those pills and throw them up. I can't wait for the next update!
MadelineRenee chapter 9 . 1/21/2010
I continue to really enjoy this story. I think the way you've written Bella's inner monologue is great!
kenyaran chapter 9 . 1/21/2010
Please say they will be free soon!

Thanks for the update!

And thank you for making James impotent, at least for now. He's already so creepy.

Bella should hide her pills behind her upper molars, your cheeks hold the pills in place while you're showing the underside of your worked for me when I was a kid anyway! I hated swallowing pills.
LCO chapter 9 . 1/21/2010
God, i love this fic so much!

So sad! Crazy messed up idiot maniac James! I fucking hate him so bad! Poor Bella and Lily...

Please let it end soon!

TessLouise chapter 9 . 1/21/2010
I hope she finds a way to mess him up!
Fiyaaa chapter 9 . 1/21/2010
Brilliant chapter... Can't wait for more :-)
Cullenary chapter 9 . 1/21/2010
geez girl-that was amazing-this is so scary and intense-I'm tellin ya-get ready for reviews cuz your gonna have thousands! your a great writer-this story seems to have so many options of where it could go and thats why I am dieing to read more! I am left wondering if they'll escape or get rescued-how far james will get with B-if B will be completely addicted to these drugs and have terrible withdrawls after she's rescued-where the heck they are-if james is gonna find the food stash...I can hear the doctors after the rescue saying how suprisingly great Lily is doing thanks to B through her ordeal and Edward will make it his personal mission to help B-I already remember him saying he was gonna buy her an island! Anyway honey-GREAT JOB! And thanks for writing!xoxoxoxoxoxooxoxoxoxoox
becky85 chapter 9 . 1/21/2010
Phew I'm glad James has issues rising to the occasion! Let's hope he dosnt discover Viagra lol! I actually do still posess my rainbrow brite doll, well actually it's in my mums loft collecting dust lol!
StormLondon chapter 9 . 1/21/2010
Ugh! That douche James! Talk about f*cked-up-ness. URGH!
Browneyes1520 chapter 9 . 1/21/2010
i started reading this story at the beginning of the year and i was wondering how many chapters is this story going to be.
emdh chapter 9 . 1/21/2010
That was a tough chapter to read because of what happened to the characters. I hope they get out of there soon!
kelleygirl chapter 9 . 1/21/2010
wow, yeah definitely dark, but it is easier to see how messed up james really is...really wish bella could figure out how to trick him about the medicine (she's really going to need to be awake to turn his lights off)...can't wait to see what is happening back at the ranch...and i think that bella and lily will need therapy for awhile, and, if their captivity lasts much longer i think they will be inseperable for a long while, even after their escape/rescue...i'm sure jasper will be very impressed just how much bella is helping lily get through all of this and keeping her perspective :)
krissylee chapter 9 . 1/21/2010
ok it wasnt to bad it could have gone a lot different but im happy it didnt...hope we get an update soon...
di75 chapter 9 . 1/21/2010
omg, its so good and bad and good! dying over here for more
domen913 chapter 9 . 1/21/2010
love this story. can not wait for the next update! I'm hoping bella will figure out to maybe throw-up the pills and maybe start saying them. I know its gross but it a solution.
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