Reviews for New Teammate New love?
Momcat chapter 21 . 9/8/2014
I'm confused… Tony shot Michael towards the end of season 6 and Jenny had been killed at the end of season5, after that Vance became the director .. But, hey, this is your fanfic, so I guess you don't have necessarily to stick to the storyline of the show !
momcat chapter 18 . 9/8/2014
Again, why does McGee have to apologize ? He was acting that way because he felt betrayed and was hurt since they didn't tell him who she was and let him have feelings for her … I could kill Gibbs right now for what he did to them, mostly to Tim...
Momcat chapter 16 . 9/8/2014
It's so unfair to treat McGee like they do now… They didn't tell him that Bella was Gibbs's niece, let him fall in love with her than when he is holding back after being threatened by Gibbs, they expect him to talk ? How can't they see that he is hurting, feeling betrayed by both Gibbs and Bella ? And it's also unfair to m
Momcat chapter 12 . 9/8/2014
It's actually a relief to see a mature and McGee-caring Abby for once.. I think I like this Abby more than the bitchy one I watch on the show sometimes...
TheSilentScreams chapter 11 . 5/30/2013
Oh God! I'm laughing my head off!
"Being a chubby baby was harder than she thought."
OtterBatch chapter 37 . 8/15/2012
Amazing, btw how could Gibbs fictional brother have a different surname to Gibbs and his father? Otherwise brilliant!
Dancer551 chapter 7 . 3/3/2012
I love this story! You did such a good job, but one this confuses me. Why did u put things in italics? Where they supposed to be thoughts even though they were still in third person? Anyway, that was the only thing that bugged me. This is one of the best tim stories ive read so far!
Lil93 chapter 37 . 12/26/2011
I love this story...
ciaranoelle chapter 37 . 2/23/2011
AWESOME STORY!
Amehhh chapter 37 . 1/20/2011
And now I remember why I lived the ending so much. 3
LostForeverInHisEyes chapter 37 . 10/25/2010
Brilliant line to finish off with!

At least she fell for McGee and not DiNozzo.

Lovely story. Now I've finished this, I'll be able to get around to the sequel!
LostForeverInHisEyes chapter 35 . 10/25/2010
Loved the way Tim asked Gibbs and Gibbs' reactions.
LostForeverInHisEyes chapter 33 . 10/25/2010
Really loved bit here:

Reaching his hand out, Gibbs smacks Bella on the back of the head, "What have I said about blackmail?"

She smiles up at her uncle, "Don't get caught?" Seeing the hand move like she was going to get smacked again, "Blackmail is wrong and that's what you are for."

Slowly making my way through. Be back another day.
LostForeverInHisEyes chapter 32 . 10/25/2010
Gibbs dumping McGee in the river! Nicely done.
LostForeverInHisEyes chapter 30 . 10/24/2010
I saw that one coming, Tim finding the test result. Lovely reaction from him, so very sweet.
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