Nooooooo! It can't end here! The notes at the end say Chapter 38, but I am at the very end on Chapter 50. Please tell me there's more?

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Happy Loghain!

I highly approve of sending Leliana to look after Fergus.

I love these massive chapters!

Awwwwwwwwww! Men with babies!

YES! I am so glad to see our 'spies'!

Unexpectedly angsty, but great reading!

Woohoo! The chapter is great and so is the fan art!

Ooooh! The plot thickens! :D

Love, love, loved this chapter - especially when he kept mentioning his old knees!

Really love this story so far in my reading.

I really love this story, and I hope you continue it. I love how you have developed the characters and their relationships - they're realistic in a way that I, as a reader, can relate to them. And they're loyal to the game, too, which just makes it all that much better. I hope you'll continue this, even though your last update was so many months ago. It would be worth the wait to see how this story played out.

Oh Maker, YES! Ahem...

I am re-reading this now and reviewing as I fall in love all over again...

Loghain comparing Aurora to his beloved Ferelden...it tugged at my heart.

Layers upon layers to be admired, this tale is like an Elizabethan tapestry...amazing in scope, yet it never loses this personal feel...the reality and the love. The last moments were an exquisite entanglement (No pun intended) and I was breathless at the end. The lyrical beauty of your prose is something I'll always have to envy rather than hope to imitate...it's mesmerizing. Without melodrama or angst for the sake of angst, this story claws at my heart, makes me smile and hope... Ah, well, must read on! :)

Another wonderful chapter and one I've been waiting for...

Hopefully the next ones will be a little quicker?

Thank you for sharing as always

Take care

Naomi xxx

I am going to burst if I do ot say this: I love Vidar oO So now I can to continue reading this story... this is so addictive!