|Reviews for A Garment of Brightness|
| Changedbyreading chapter 61 . 1/19/2014
Beautiful. I feel like I'm there, like this is one of the sweat lodges I did when I was younger on a much larger scale.
| Rachel-Elizabeth2010 chapter 61 . 1/18/2014
Great story so far, looking forward to the next chapter. That's one heck of a way to leave a cliff hanger!
| Igoogleeverything chapter 61 . 1/17/2014
fabulous, she has to wake up, right?
| meelee72 chapter 51 . 1/15/2014
Love the way u've changed it.
This scene was... perfection.
| meelee72 chapter 49 . 1/15/2014
Wow, what a perspective!
I LoVe the way u relayed it.
So very cool.
I liked that the wolves were a little OOC. Like what u've done here.
I never thought I'd enjoy a different version of Twilight. ... Indeed, I do.
| meelee72 chapter 47 . 1/15/2014
Nooooowww, we're cookin w/ butter.
| meelee72 chapter 43 . 1/15/2014
Man, they really need to get on the same page.
- La Push, coming up.- surely Bella will become more enlightened.
... [love all ur puns] ... :) teehee.
| meelee72 chapter 42 . 1/15/2014
Wow, that was really sad.
- I love the acknowlegement that no one was around to grieve for the boy, Edward, as Bella now does.
I am so ready for these two to interact!
- I liked the moments between E & Jasper also. - intense -
U bring it all to so much life.
| meelee72 chapter 39 . 1/15/2014
| meelee72 chapter 37 . 1/14/2014
Well now we know that was no pot hole in the road.
What in the world will come of this now?!
Turn the page, turn the page!
| meelee72 chapter 35 . 1/14/2014
I thank ur betas as well for this great work.
| meelee72 chapter 34 . 1/14/2014
Yea, I'd meant to say that I think Billy's blessing on the truck was really cool.
Anyway, looks like things are about to get a lil more interesting...
| meelee72 chapter 33 . 1/14/2014
Very telling words of Esme's. Wise, sweet woman.
This darker Twilight is so easy to get lost in.
| meelee72 chapter 30 . 1/14/2014
It was eerie & painful for them all.- Wow.
| meelee72 chapter 29 . 1/14/2014
That was amazing.
Ur writing style is so unique. U are so talented.- I'd love to get into ur head for a bit. :)
- I really like this darker, more tortured Edward. - He's still the one we love, he is still compassionate, but more raw. I love it.
& again, I love ur flow of words.