Reviews for A Garment of Brightness
polyphany chapter 62 . 1/20/2014
Love it!
ickaren chapter 62 . 1/20/2014
She wants to find Edward so desperately, so deeply, yearning. But she has come back to life, but still incompletely, waiting and looking for hom.
Vagabonda chapter 62 . 1/20/2014
Yes. Blood. The call of her blood will bring Edward back. I have to believe this. Such poetry you've written, Miao. Such poetry. Beautiful, sad, poignant. Poetry.
merocz chapter 62 . 1/20/2014
Goodness, you keep me guessing! Just when I think I know Edward will be back to save her, you take the story in a totally different direction and I love it. I miss Edward though, so much. I look forward to every update to see how this is going to continue to unfold!
Changedbyreading chapter 61 . 1/19/2014
Beautiful. I feel like I'm there, like this is one of the sweat lodges I did when I was younger on a much larger scale.
Rachel-Elizabeth2010 chapter 61 . 1/18/2014
Great story so far, looking forward to the next chapter. That's one heck of a way to leave a cliff hanger!
Igoogleeverything chapter 61 . 1/17/2014
fabulous, she has to wake up, right?
meelee72 chapter 51 . 1/15/2014
Love the way u've changed it.

This scene was... perfection.
meelee72 chapter 49 . 1/15/2014
Wow, what a perspective!
I LoVe the way u relayed it.
So very cool.

I liked that the wolves were a little OOC. Like what u've done here.

I never thought I'd enjoy a different version of Twilight. ... Indeed, I do.
meelee72 chapter 47 . 1/15/2014
Nooooowww, we're cookin w/ butter.
Love it.
meelee72 chapter 43 . 1/15/2014
Man, they really need to get on the same page.
- La Push, coming up.- surely Bella will become more enlightened.

... [love all ur puns] ... :) teehee.
meelee72 chapter 42 . 1/15/2014
Wow, that was really sad.
- I love the acknowlegement that no one was around to grieve for the boy, Edward, as Bella now does.

I am so ready for these two to interact!

- I liked the moments between E & Jasper also. - intense -
U bring it all to so much life.
meelee72 chapter 39 . 1/15/2014
meelee72 chapter 37 . 1/14/2014

Well now we know that was no pot hole in the road.

What in the world will come of this now?!

Turn the page, turn the page!
meelee72 chapter 35 . 1/14/2014
I thank ur betas as well for this great work.
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