Reviews for A Garment of Brightness
Changedbyreading chapter 61 . 1/19/2014
Beautiful. I feel like I'm there, like this is one of the sweat lodges I did when I was younger on a much larger scale.
Rachel-Elizabeth2010 chapter 61 . 1/18/2014
Great story so far, looking forward to the next chapter. That's one heck of a way to leave a cliff hanger!
Igoogleeverything chapter 61 . 1/17/2014
fabulous, she has to wake up, right?
meelee72 chapter 51 . 1/15/2014
Love the way u've changed it.

This scene was... perfection.
meelee72 chapter 49 . 1/15/2014
Wow, what a perspective!
I LoVe the way u relayed it.
So very cool.

I liked that the wolves were a little OOC. Like what u've done here.

I never thought I'd enjoy a different version of Twilight. ... Indeed, I do.
meelee72 chapter 47 . 1/15/2014
Nooooowww, we're cookin w/ butter.
Love it.
meelee72 chapter 43 . 1/15/2014
Man, they really need to get on the same page.
- La Push, coming up.- surely Bella will become more enlightened.

... [love all ur puns] ... :) teehee.
meelee72 chapter 42 . 1/15/2014
Wow, that was really sad.
- I love the acknowlegement that no one was around to grieve for the boy, Edward, as Bella now does.

I am so ready for these two to interact!

- I liked the moments between E & Jasper also. - intense -
U bring it all to so much life.
meelee72 chapter 39 . 1/15/2014
meelee72 chapter 37 . 1/14/2014

Well now we know that was no pot hole in the road.

What in the world will come of this now?!

Turn the page, turn the page!
meelee72 chapter 35 . 1/14/2014
I thank ur betas as well for this great work.
meelee72 chapter 34 . 1/14/2014
Yea, I'd meant to say that I think Billy's blessing on the truck was really cool.

Anyway, looks like things are about to get a lil more interesting...
meelee72 chapter 33 . 1/14/2014
Very telling words of Esme's. Wise, sweet woman.

This darker Twilight is so easy to get lost in.
meelee72 chapter 30 . 1/14/2014
It was eerie & painful for them all.- Wow.
meelee72 chapter 29 . 1/14/2014
That was amazing.
Ur writing style is so unique. U are so talented.- I'd love to get into ur head for a bit. :)
- I really like this darker, more tortured Edward. - He's still the one we love, he is still compassionate, but more raw. I love it.
& again, I love ur flow of words.
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