Reviews for A Garment of Brightness
petmom1213 chapter 19 . 7/6/2015
I don't understand the chapters like this one. The rest of the story is good but the verse like chapters mixed in make it confusing. What do they mean? Mickey
Guest chapter 62 . 6/27/2015
Ok ...now I just mad...you can not let it end this way...
Amanda Boyd chapter 62 . 5/26/2015
I am so confused
gredelina1 chapter 62 . 5/15/2015
I've been pouring over this story for the last couple of days. You've made me cry. A lot. Such beautiful writing. So much angst.

I did notice that it's been a long time since you updated. I hope that you are well and I hope you'll continue the story, because I just have to believe that the Cullen's aren't really gone.

Thank you for sharing your talent with words with the world.
austenbrontemeyer chapter 62 . 5/1/2015
(Did not realize I was not logged in so here it is logged in) Sooo... all of the Cullens are dead? Ok, hmmm...how exactly did that happen and why? I am sorry, however I feel a bit irritated having wasted my time hanging on for 62 chapters out of respect for the work you put forth at the outset. Your readers were never offered an informed decision which made sense. It feels as if you wanted to keep going, and going, and going, and going on, dragging what was an intriguing story into the muck for 62 chapters so you would have something to occupy your time. You should have shelved the 40 or so chapters surrounding its midpoint and accomplished a similar bomb, yet with so much less time wasted. Once again a writer has gone for the shock value instead of a tragic yet well thought out close. I think in the 5 years I have been reading here, only this particular story and one other out of hundreds have been awarded the dubious distinction of, "ass kicker". That is, not in a, "Wow, this story kicks ass!", kind of way but more of a, "I could just kick my own ass for continuing to read on and on and on and on, well after the thing should have been put down by the nearest 12 gauge.
Austenbrontemeye chapter 62 . 5/1/2015
Sooo... all of the Cullens are dead? Ok, how exactly did that happen and why? I am sorry however I feel a bit irritated having wasted my time hanging on for 62 chapters out of respect for the work you put forth at the outset. Your readers were never offered an informed decision which made sense. It feels as if you wanted to keep going, and going, and going, and going on, dragging what was an intriguing story into the muck for 62 chapters so you would have something to occupy your time. You should have shelved the 40 or so chapters surrounding its midpoint and accomplished a similar bomb, yet with so much less time wasted. Once again a writer has gone for the shock value instead of a tragic yet well thought out close. I think in the 5 years I have been reading here, only this particular story and one other out of hundreds have been awarded the dubious distinction of, "ass kicker". That is, not in a, "Wow, this story kicks ass!", kind of way but more of a, "I could just kick my own ass for continuing to read on and on and on and on, well after the thing should have been put down by the nearest 12 gauge.
jk chapter 20 . 4/28/2015
why would she want to take some home remedy from a dude that hates her? I fucking wouldn't. id have just thrown that bag in the trash cause really who really knows what all that crap was. olive branch my ass
this story is really about nothing...were 20 chapters in and all that's happened is bella moved to forks and Edward glares at her and now she has a cold...that's all that's happened in 20 chapters...did you think you were doing something here?
jk chapter 18 . 4/28/2015
I really don't get why bella thinks about assward so often...she shouldn't think about his rude ass at all
jk chapter 17 . 4/28/2015
bellas not hot? then what is she since all the guys are fantasizing about her
jk chapter 16 . 4/28/2015
what was the point of that chapter...you coulda just wrote my brothers and sisters took me hunting. Emmett was excited that we might find a bar and we ate some sheep. instead you wrote about nothing paragraph after paragraph and bored the crap outta me
jk chapter 15 . 4/28/2015
I hope im a needle in his eye...wow did she get that from the school of seriously stupid things to say about people that are mean to you
jk chapter 14 . 4/28/2015
I really don't like the way you have Emmett talk...he wasn't just fucking changed. but you have him talking like he was just changed and is still some kind of backwoods trapper or something...fuckin stupid

and I absolutely hate how arrogant Edward is, I want bella to not like him and tell him to fuck off...and MEAN IT
jk chapter 8 . 4/28/2015
what was this bullshit about?
jk chapter 6 . 4/28/2015
so let me get this straight shes new and she goes to sit down and some guy points at her and say she stinks and she doesn't say anything...then goes to the bathroom and crys? yaaaa that's likely!
why? why would you have her say nothing? she shoulda said

nah hes just embarrassed, when I walked up to the table I saw that he had a erection and now he knows I know how tiny his peen is...

ya he wants to move cause I smell like a women...and he hates that

let him move I do smell. I used my dads shampoo and I remind Edward of his last boyfriend

he thinks all women should smell like his mom, hes into that

I mean something! but no you have her go cry in the bathroom like a total pussy
j chapter 1 . 4/28/2015
did you really write a whole chapter on what the scenery looks like...first chapter and its already boring as hell
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