Reviews for Twisted Rivals
csilivili12 chapter 5 . 6/1/2013
You dont write the names right: DiNozzo, McGee, Abby
Amberleaf le Haunt chapter 6 . 7/31/2010
*LE GASP!* :O Write more; please! This is very, very interesting! .;
Pyro-Neko-Isis chapter 4 . 7/17/2010
writing when depressed is not odd... its (if you don't mind me stating) due to not liking the area/situation/feelings that are happening around you & writing helps you vent it out so its not bottled in... but that is just my point of view
damnitw chapter 3 . 6/27/2010
ohoh poor mcGee...rest in peace
xXhelenatimjohnnyXx chapter 6 . 6/13/2010
Love it. Please update soon! :)
A Bit Of Courage chapter 5 . 1/17/2010
Hi,

I love your story I think it's a great idea to have a NCIS and Lie To Me crossover and yours is great. Can't wait for more.

Vicky/Homicidal-Leprechaun
YaoiGirl1997 chapter 3 . 12/1/2009
PLEASE UPDATE!
Solivagant chapter 3 . 12/1/2009
McGee? That was a surprise, to say the least. Everyone's very in character, which is more than I can say for most other stories.

But, I have to say the same thing I said before. The editing is truly terrible.

~Miranda
Solivagant chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
Liked it! I've been waiting for an NCIS/Lie to Me crossover, so thanks for that:) Hey, what if we got some Tony/Torres? That'd be funny

Maybe you should get a beta reader or something for spelling and grammer cleanup. Just a suggestion, but it really does need a fair amount of work.

Update soon!
AdeleParker chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
Lovin it so far! Two of my favourite shows! ) Can't wait for more! Please update! )
mo lei tau chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
Very good story, interesting, hm... Maybe Dinozo will go for Foster? (just an idea!) Just saying, but could use a bit work on the spelling/grammar part-otherwise it's good!