Reviews for Luffy's Day Out
Guest chapter 1 . 3/29
There is a lot of things wrong with this. First off Robin knew durn well who Ace was even before she got on the ship. Other wise Nani did tell her. That's why she wasn't surprised when right before the time skip in the newspaper that talked about luffy losing his brother. So only Franky and Brook don't know him. Duh. The rest of the crew knows who Hancock is and they never met her. Second off, Ace didn't know Luffy when he was 1, he met luffy when luffy was 7.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/11/2015
So cute o
Titania1796 chapter 3 . 7/9/2015
puedes hacer una secuela estuvo muy divertido
Guest chapter 3 . 6/30/2015
When everyone got excited over Luffy walking i was like "guys hes like seventeen." but when luffy said aces name i fangirled, damn my maternal instincts! But seriously that was great and I really enjoyed it. I love the relationship between Ace and Luffy and was glar that this wasnt another sick fantasy where people ruin their beautiful brotherly relationship by shipping them. ...I seem to have gotten off track...anyway good job and I really enjoyed it.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/27/2015
The last Japanese translation is wrong. Tonakai means reindeer. Tanuki is a raccoon-dog, I think? Everyone thinks Chopper is a tanuki but his is a tonakai. Random piece of info, but annyywaaayys you write a really good story, good idea and plot!
WingsofaBelle chapter 3 . 6/30/2014
ahhhh so kawaii! Surprising it was Whitebeard who saved luffy who wasn't even really looking! Ace and luffy are so adorable! Great story! i hope there's more!
Fi Suki Saki chapter 3 . 3/24/2014
Oh Ace... I envy you...!

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Baby Luffy is sooo cute...!

Never thought it would be Shirohige Oyaji who end up saved Baby Luffy...

And i dont know he can do Haoshoku no Haki...
Though with his leadership and loved as father and respected by many people, he does have potential to have Haoshoku no Haki... Hmm..
Kakkoi naa, Oyaji...!
seblackburn4 chapter 3 . 11/7/2013
this was so cute!
LostFairyMantic chapter 3 . 9/28/2013
Aww this story is so cute! Lil chubby chibi luffy daw that's just adorablE! I love the zoro Omake at the end!
Amyand chapter 3 . 8/30/2013
Aww! Its so sweeeeeet!
Love it so muuucch...you really did a great job!
Truly amazing story..
Im so sad when it finished..wush the story will longer..
Please write again...i'll be always waiting for your fanfic
onepiecefannumber1 chapter 3 . 8/14/2013
update soon
Animezpeps chapter 3 . 8/1/2013
poor snake poor ace
Animezpeps chapter 2 . 8/1/2013
hahahahahahahahahha
jam klaoo chapter 3 . 6/9/2013
. :D
LyricoJ chapter 3 . 6/9/2013
Awwww ...seriously baby luffy is so cute.
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