Reviews for Ten Years Abcense |
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![]() ![]() KEEP WRITING PLZZZ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome really can't wait for more please |
![]() ![]() ok so im confused sorry but i liked it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really quite like this story. It's very interesting. But, if I may make a friendly suggestion? There's some grammatical errors. I would gladly read over the chapters before you post them, like a beta. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it and I can't wait for you to update. |
![]() ![]() I could barley read this it makes no seance. ADD MORE DETAILS as lang. arts teachers would say. B) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I little confusing but good so far, btw its Emmett not Emit |
![]() ![]() ![]() sorry a bit to confusing what is going on and why are you jumping around so much i dont get it but good luck sounds like a cool summery anyways. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it!...cant wait to read more...keep up the good work!...update soon... :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome chappy...can't wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im still LOVIN it! I hope to read more SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like it so far, update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() love the first chapter, update asap |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a kinda cool story line but it makes absolutely NO sense. try and straighten out everything and you have a good idea. also, spell check before you put it up. keep going just try and make it more clear |