|Reviews for Laid Bare|
| Twifanfictionrec chapter 1 . 10/5
Hi, your story has been posted on Instagram twilight fan fiction recommendation page ( twifanfictionrec). Full review as below:
I have probably read hundreds of different versions of the story between a vampire and a human, however, I can without a doubt say that this is one of the best versions. A VERY intense love story between Edward and Bella, as they navigate their way through lust, love and the wolves. This fiction gives you that sensuality and sexuality we relate vampirism with. I promise your life is incomplete until you have read this fiction. If not for the plot line, definitely read for the lemons therein, cs it will leave you wanting more. Vampireward/Humanella
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/29
Bellas really fucking weird in this...and Edwards kinda a loser. Bellas all damaged because her mom died? AND? shes still got her dad and friends fucking whiny pussy...they all leave...no one ever stays...I mean one person didn't stay LOL...what a fucking child
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/29
Bellas pretty useless in this but I like Edward.
If bella has to hide who she really is and pretend and shit...then shes just a stupid immature girl with issues ya know?
| Mayuri love cullens chapter 30 . 6/7
Amazing Amazing story! Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us! Beautifully written 3
| jk chapter 14 . 11/30/2016
I cant read anymore of this bullshit...Edward touching a nasty used up ginger? yaaaa right...bellas a gross whore...
screaming and crying about "get him off me"...like james fucking raped her or something...fucking playing the victim card bella?
| jk chapter 9 . 11/30/2016
he was gonna fuck Victoria! OMG I'm gonna throw the fuck up! that's fucking disgusting
| jk chapter 3 . 11/30/2016
why does edwad come off so cocky when really hes just a 17 year old emo vampire with emotional and sexual issues?
| jk chapter 1 . 11/30/2016
if he could get hard for some random whore then surely hes fucked the denali whores right? and if that's the case...I just don't want him with bella...used up Edward? no thanks...but then again your bellas pretty used up too huh
| jk chapter 1 . 11/30/2016
this is a story where Edward changed rose for himself? um NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO fuck that its fucking nasty!
and he let some whore suck his dick? um nooooo
| dancer54 chapter 1 . 9/21/2016
Whew... damn! I'm hooked.
| Djejdjdjendkd chapter 30 . 8/3/2016
Best Bella I've read. I loved this story. Can't believe I just found it!
| Lillywhite1 chapter 30 . 6/28/2016
Simply wow. Great story. Thanks for writing this!
| Ka-sheep chapter 3 . 6/1/2016
| Susan2e chapter 30 . 4/24/2016
Great story. Thank you.
| jk chapter 21 . 3/20/2016
ya I didn't get the whole jake thing...with his I'm doing you a favor again...say thank you and leave forever...get out of my town...LOL yaaaa forks is your town...ooookkkkkk
jake acting like bella fucked him over...yaaaa not so much. it seemed to me that your trying to create drama where there shouldn't be...sure he should be upset...but you took that shit way to far..and to have bella not really say anything back? total crap..
chapter 21 is a fucking wash