Reviews for With But a Pull of the Strings
YeagerMeister31 chapter 14 . 10/11
nice chapter there all cool everytime i read about what they dress like and the fact they run on water reminds me of a Korean movie called Buchmonmo great film also can't wait for this to be updated
YeagerMeister31 chapter 13 . 10/10
another nice chapter can't wait 2 c what happens next
YeagerMeister31 chapter 12 . 10/10
another cool chapter Naruto is smart it's cool and now Jiraiya is here that's cool
YeagerMeister31 chapter 11 . 10/10
another cool chapter very interesting wonder how Hiruzen will take to knowing how Naruto is doing. can't wait for the Naruto and Jiriaya could be interesting can't wait for that some more battle yay and i hope there's at least some sighs of romance soon at least i think Yugao is starting to c naruto differently now
YeagerMeister31 chapter 10 . 10/9
well i enjoyed this chapter a lot all sneaky and stealthy was awesome
YeagerMeister31 chapter 9 . 10/9
another cool chapter i love the ninja sneaking around gig Naruto is so cool. Yugao is also badass. Shikamaru is also cool although he's lazy he's smart as hell and cool. Haku well not sure what to think of her really. Can't wait to read what happens next

also can't wait for Naruto and Yugao to get closer i know Yugao mentioned in this chapter that she wants to know how Naruto feels about her i'm anxious to find out also
YeagerMeister31 chapter 8 . 10/8
another nice chapter i wonder if naruto will end up meeting Shino, Shiki and Choji as there both in wave country guess i'll find out soon
YeagerMeister31 chapter 7 . 10/7
another nice chapter was right about the girl being Haku can't wait for more
YeagerMeister31 chapter 6 . 10/7
a nice chapter i wonder when the romance will start as for the girl i'm thinking it's Haku but i could be wrong guess i'll find out soon cool story though alot different form the original story every chapter it's cool i can't wait for more
YeagerMeister31 chapter 5 . 10/6
this was another new chapter there a great team just wondering when the romance will start
YeagerMeister31 chapter 4 . 10/5
another nice chapter can't wait for more of this cool story
YeagerMeister31 chapter 3 . 10/5
an interesting if not sad chapter really hate danzo can't wait for more though
YeagerMeister31 chapter 2 . 10/5
an interesting chapter
YeagerMeister31 chapter 1 . 10/4
this surely is interesting concept can't wait for more
StoneTheLoner chapter 14 . 2/28
Shame you never finished this story. I'm always looking for story's with Naruto ANYWHERE but the same old Konoha like can be found in thousands of other Naruto fanfics. And the Black Lagoon feel and mercenary idea was interesting enough that I'll probably look for Black Lagoon - Naruto crossovers soon. Anyway, this was a great fanfic and I really hope you get around to finishing this "longest arc" of you mentioned. :
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