Reviews for My Angel
metsfan101 chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
this is really good
krozx chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Herajuku chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
I think this story is great, you should continue. Don't let petty comments ruin it. I think it's easy to follow despite the grammer errors and besides everyone makes mistakes. I hope to read more soon.
epitomeofdeath chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
I hope I won't crush your self-confidence but your grammar and spelling is terrible.. And the format of the story is just so wrong. Put appropriate punctuation marks and capitalize those that should be capitalized. Put spaces between sentences and dialogues.

Ask for help.
Sora Matasuki chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
oh, hikari! that was so cute! *CHOKES ON SILIVA* oh no! no one;s reveiwed on this except me? WELL I KNOW WHAT TO DO! ADD YOU TO MY FAVORITES!