Reviews for Progress
Karen Cullen Grey chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
wahoo! Edward got bella off! will u ever continue this?
I hate angst chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
AWWW! I wish new moon was like this. ( then the pedofile dog could die)

Now I want Edward for my brithday too! ;)
GreenBlueEyedGirl chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
that was very nicely done...

can i just say u can really write
Julia-S77 chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
this was a much better version of Bella's birthday than the one in New Moon. Loved it xx
twilightsilje chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
Oh, how I wish Edward could do this for me on my birthday ! :))
Natalia Mazaur chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
Now why couldn't the actual book have gone like this? I think Stephenie Meyer could take a few lessons from you.

Great story, really good. Now I need a freakin' cold shower.
Alterite chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
I wish Stephenie Meyer had written that, we would have been spared the heartache that was New Moon! Plus, Eclipse would have been much more enjoyable! lol

Love from France,

A. xx
annaharding chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
Nice birthday present!
thepinktabby chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
Aww sweetness. I loved it! Thanks
1918EC chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
Loved it so much! As much as I love the books it still amazes me how much better they could have been(if they hadn't been written in PG form, no disrespect to SM)Your version of Bella's birthday is soooooo much better than the book; I really did love it... xoxo
bronzed topaz chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Definitely should have been in the book. Alternate scene would have been so much better. I

m sure we still could have written the series relatively the same, just, you know, from here instead...

Ok, I just don't like Edward leaving. Obviously.

Or Jacob.

But I liked the end of New Moon...

I liked this one shot, if it wasn't obvious before. This is a much better ending.

Good job.
Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
I love it.
lilly9999 chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
I like this turn of events better! Good story

AllimayNicole chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
I loved it,

this is exsactly how I picture edward !
Iplaythefrenchhornlovetwilight chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
i like this version of new moon better! very nice
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