|Reviews for Progress|
| Jamieson Zed chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Um...yeah. I like your version a WHOLE lot more than canon. Just saying ;-)
| DawnStimson chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Much better situation here!
| Siyd chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
I wish New Moon would've gone like this. Imagine how much better the movie would've been. And no kissing Jake!
| JanetL chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
THis dovetails into New Moon so nicely. I got a lump in my throat at the end, knowing what she didn't.
| AllisCullen chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
So so so so so sweet & yet so HOT!
You rocked my socks off with this one!
| Jaguarsolaris chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
thanks for this verison of the birthday.
| Iceblondie chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Now thats a great Birthday
See baby steps and soon he will be able to do the deed.
| sunnyfara chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
You wrote Edward so true. Thanks. Good stuff.
| punz chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
Loved it! Great O/S!
| saratan182 chapter 1 . 12/22/2009
great story. love it. lemons never tasted so sweet haha.
| Musette Fujiwara chapter 1 . 12/22/2009
This was much better...
| Pink Is just a color chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
| sugar rae chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
| guccisassy chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
That was so satisfying!
| Ithilwen K-Bane chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
FINALLY SOMEONE REALIZES THAT EDWARD SPARKLEPANTS CULLEN DOESN'T HAVE TO DEFLOWER HIS VIRGIN LOVE TO HAVE A GOOD TIME. Enjoy the middle ground, kids!
Oh Edward did not suggest that they just wait for Bella to get old.
I like that you didn't jump into the hers-and-his model. Yes, it makes sense that Bella would want to return the favor, but it also makes sense that Edward would say he wasn't ready for that.
Technically, this isn't alternate universe; it's deviation 'fic.