Reviews for Betrayal
Stubbe chapter 5 . 9/21/2013
Are you going to continue the story? o: I think its really great and I would love to read more ! u
littleblueclovers chapter 5 . 11/11/2011
*gasp* "not good enough"? How dare you insult your awesome work! (_)

please continue in this! It's too good!

I wonder how orochimaru would react if shikamaru ever answered his questions/requests before he even said them? lol

I hope you don't get writer's block as frequently as I do!

Good luck! (_)
Tamuril2 chapter 5 . 10/25/2011
Hi there! I just finished reading what you had written so far of your story (and your A/N). I like the plotline. It's pretty original and interesting. I never really imagined a plot as this one, but I must say I've more than warmed up to the idea. Poor Shikamaru is a sacrifical lamb, so to speak. I hope he does decide to help his ex-village, if only because some people (like Asuma) care about him.

Please update this soon. I would really hate if you dropped it. Thanks for the enjoyable read!

Tamuril2
L. Valiant chapter 4 . 1/17/2011
I'm waiting so much for a new chapter! This is really a WONDERFUL fanfics! Please, complete it :)
Everdark61 chapter 2 . 10/7/2010
Just re-read the story again :) I'm liking the edited version and I'm looking forward to the bit where Shika and Oro finally meet! Really looking forward to more of the edited version :P
Nigtalea chapter 5 . 10/3/2010
Thank you so muc for carrying this on/editing it!

If you had deleted or abandoned this I would have hunted you down and killed you! (or at least sware at you a lot) P

Night*
saiyanprincekills chapter 5 . 10/2/2010
I didn't think it sucked at all, its quite an interesting story and it hasn't been done before. Ive always wanted to know how horrible it would be living with Orochimaru. I look forward to the edited version. Xx
Everdark61 chapter 5 . 10/2/2010
Oooh! This story is still really interesting.. and I'm glad your not deleting it :) Looking forward to seeing what your going to do!
Insipid Inane chapter 4 . 4/28/2010
hey,hey i think this went well. yes, it is a bit longer but can be better. there is some grammer errors but you can improve them.. all in all, it's something enjoyful
SilverWillowfly chapter 4 . 4/26/2010
Yipee! Some ShikaTem! I hope there's more!
Everdark61 chapter 4 . 4/25/2010
Aww, that's sad moment between Shika and Temari :( Really looking forward to what happens to Shika next!
Everdark61 chapter 3 . 4/23/2010
This is a really interesting idea and a great start! Looking forward to more :)
SilverWillowfly chapter 3 . 1/18/2010
This is so good! You need another chapter! One that is super long, too! I hate waiting for this! Come on! Come on! Come on! Sorry if I sound a bit too enthusiastic, but hey, I'm on a suger rush!
empress paradox chapter 3 . 1/18/2010
cool... but i hope you would maybe make it a little bit longer. maybe at least 500 minimum. but hey, i'm not the author of it and this is just a suggestion. anywho, good job.
SilverWillowfly chapter 2 . 1/10/2010
I really like the idea of this story. Sure, the first two chapters were short, but even if they are, post the next one soon! Please!
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