Reviews for Hope Abandoned
mcdde5Heno chapter 11 . 5/21/2016
Awesome story! I'm so glad I discovered your work! I wish you were a writer for the show! I would love to see your stories on the screen. As always...thanks for sharing your gift!
gluedwithgold chapter 11 . 8/17/2015
Loved this story so much - there are always so many different roads this show could take, so many gaps left in it's enormous story arcs, so I love to read other people's take on what would be in those holes if the show could have taken the time to flesh them out. This story really feels like something that could have made it on screen if only we got 52 episodes a year!
spnfan44 chapter 11 . 3/11/2015
Wonderful story! You have a very unique voice and I love it! The more religous parts of the story add a lot I feel the show could use. I understand the middle ground they tread but your stories are a great balance!
NoilyPrat chapter 9 . 3/10/2015
I like Cass's straightforward thinking. He gave Sam a minute. Now he'll keep his promise.

Like the rain - God's handiwork - in putting out the fire. And Cass pulling a Dean Winchester. :D
NoilyPrat chapter 11 . 2/21/2015
love the impromptu birthday party...

This was a good fic. Doesn't wrap everything up, but why should it? The show doesn't... It just showed us the emotional toil Sam was going thru, and the attack Lucifer did while Sam was at his lowest. They made it thru ... out the other side. Good one.
NoilyPrat chapter 10 . 2/21/2015
NoilyPrat chapter 6 . 2/21/2015
And Lucifer brought him back...

Sam's plan was a good one, unfortunately. And Dean leaving was the perfect opportunity ...

good chapter, angst!
NoilyPrat chapter 5 . 2/21/2015
I like Cass - he's so direct!
NoilyPrat chapter 4 . 2/21/2015
oh WOW !
Love how you wrote what happened in Sam's dream - thought that was real... and it was too close for Sam to say yes to...

LOVE Cass knocking him out, giving him the peaceful sleep Sam so desperately needs.
Poor sobbing Dean, not knowing what to do.. right there with you
NoilyPrat chapter 3 . 2/21/2015
I like this - from Dean's POV.

He knows Sam feels the weight of the world, and curses it. But he forces the promise out of him - that he will keep saying No to Lucifer... good for Dean!
NoilyPrat chapter 2 . 2/21/2015
wow .. I like the way you've spelled out Sam's perceived faults - his fault mom died, his fault dad's unhappy, his fault Jess died, his fault Dean went to hell ... and that he couldn't have someone to pray to, because he was the chosen vessel of Lucifer.

And he's closer to saying yes to ending the whole mess a whole lot more than anyone is thinking...
SupernaturallyEgocentric chapter 11 . 9/7/2011
Great job, liked this story a lot. Really tremendous.
SupernaturallyEgocentric chapter 9 . 9/7/2011
Great chapter!
Hermione's Shadow chapter 11 . 9/22/2010
omg, that was freaking AWESOME! I TOTALLY loved the story. I mean, it was just so totally awesome all the way around. They way you wrote all of them, especially Cas, it was just brilliant. To me all of these characters are so unbelievably difficult to write and keep them accurate. Getting just enough angst, without making them too soft but at the same time not making them too hard either. And Cas, for as emotionally simple he should be to write, he really isn't. It is very difficult to find a story that portrays him accurately (at least in my opinion). I'm always thrilled when I come across a story that gets at least one of the characters write, or at least Sam and Dean, but the fact that you managed to get both the boys AND Bobby AND Cas? Totally amazing! I ESPECIALLY loved the way you wrote Cas :D :D
carocali chapter 11 . 7/2/2010
Really enjoyed this. I love how Sam struggles to do the right thing but even he is exhausted. I'm not a Cas fan, but you made me like him a little bit more, especially when he was trapped by Lucifer.

Thanks for sharing!

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