Reviews for Retsu's Folly
FrostyBehemoth chapter 1 . 12/20/2023
Yeppppppp, just finished the chapter. Thanks fir ruining this great story just so you can do some love interest BULSHIT. FUCK YOU. FUCK YOUUUUUU. Absolutely fucking rediculous. Why the fuck would he take her there? in what fucking universe would that be a good idea? He just met the fucking bitch. FUCK off you fucking sniviling cunt fuck. Drown in a hole. Fuck. He just SAVED HER ASS from TWO NOBODIES. How the FLYING FUCK is she gonna survive there huh? oh plot of course, you fucking wanker. fuck me. thank you so much fir writing a half decent first chapter only to THROW IT DOWN A FUCKING DITCH. FUCK. Go fuck yourself.

But for real dude, the fuck are you thinking? this was actually going so well. Fuck answer why the flying fuck he would take her. In what world would that be a goid idea? Fir what reason would he take thus random ass gurl who he just met into the worst part of that world? LITERALLY the worst and most dangerous part. Fuck youve fucked me off. Thanks for sharing and giving it a try, it was goid while it lasted, But Fuck you.
FrostyBehemoth chapter 1 . 12/20/2023
Bro, if he takes her with him to district 80 im going to lose my shit. He better send her on her fucking way to the academy because aint no way he'd bring her with him to that kind if place. dont even try and spin this shit about her wanting to come along. Dont fuck up your story already.
nagiten chapter 12 . 11/16/2023
when did u have harry sit back down after he got up to pick up the kitten? i thought rangiku had to go with mao since harry won the bet
nagiten chapter 11 . 11/16/2023
aizen is a lockhart..hahhahahh
nagiten chapter 10 . 11/16/2023
did the leader already have his sword out cause you had it written he had it out for all to see and he used it on rangiku so instead of fighting the thrist he just ignores it? yeah great plan harry , also it took him long enough to realise any blood including his own would do
nagiten chapter 6 . 11/16/2023
hmm still think harry unknowing making himself a harem
i thought hat and clogs also had a female spirit who is he yet to appear or manifest her?
nagiten chapter 5 . 11/16/2023
is harry creating a harem without realising it? also he still hasnt realised he has been in the afterlife longer then he thinks, also harry didnt catch when the guy said 4 classes did he?
nagiten chapter 4 . 11/16/2023
so what harry has two swords or a hollowish and a soul reaper power? why is he so shocked it been a year? he knew it was months of travel even before he finished training with retsu, and it shiba clan not kaien clan. harry holding himself back in a way akin to ichigo was...hmm
nagiten chapter 2 . 11/16/2023
if he stopped healing those who want him dead they wouldnt regroup, harry still wears glasses? he didnt heal his eyes or have retsu do it or was just ''reborn'' without them?
so harry spirit is the goddess of death? fitting.
nagiten chapter 1 . 11/15/2023
what did he think he was going to have to do in 80? just hurt them a little? rough them up? and he still thinks what they look like is there age oh so innocent
Pinkypi chapter 13 . 4/23/2023
Ah this was really well written. It's interesting how you wrote yourself some leeway in that over the course of 5 years the Manga itself spilt its answers and secrets for you for the blanks to be filled in. You had Retsu procure him an Asauchi to use only for us to later find out yup it's mandatory for the zanpakuto to be able to manifest properly. Then you left holes that made her seem dangerous and yup she's the 1st Kenpachi, Yachiru. All of Yoruichi's bending over backwards to get him somewhere safe now and it felt like had you continued to write this story he'd most likely end up in the 11th division.
Astramilitarum01 chapter 13 . 3/25/2023
Not sure what the plan was of if it's set up for the long run with a heavy grow cycle but so far Harry and the other characters just don't really work out together. This "Power play" with izanami makes no sense , the backstory, master of Death line etc. Don't even make sense in the canon timeline. Also his reactions are like nothing that would make sense of someone who knows hardship and just came out of what is basically a war.
Overall it's just a massive amount of AU contend with overblown Drama.
DracoKing30 chapter 12 . 1/28/2023
Really love this story can't wait for new chapters
NineYetis chapter 5 . 8/9/2022
Poor Harry. An academy forcing its students to write a Will is one of the most metal things I’ve ever read.
OmegaUltima chapter 13 . 7/30/2022
Alas, it seems that we shall never learn more about this Harry, or the world he left behind...
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