Reviews for A Helping Friend, Helping Fate
gossgal33 chapter 4 . 7/11/2013
UPDATE THIS PLEASE!
Not So Sirius chapter 4 . 11/21/2012
cool. i really like it; it's well writen. more please!
running.with.wolves chapter 4 . 1/3/2011
this is a good story! dont abandon it!
Katie-Tails123 chapter 4 . 7/27/2010
i love this book its awsome katiexx
Vicki219 chapter 4 . 4/19/2010
Aw i feel so sorry for Bella but it's kinda cool that she has Lily as a friend. Hope you update soon
LilyHeartsMarauders chapter 4 . 3/26/2010
This is a little better I somewhat like Twilight this is good though
LilyHeartsMarauders chapter 3 . 3/26/2010
Lily should have disapparated with Bella to show she is faster
bookluvrxoxo chapter 4 . 2/6/2010
this is really good, you always read those stories when they're with HP but i really like it the way you made it into the Marauders golden age
MissLizziebeth chapter 4 . 1/16/2010
lurrve it so far! Lily and Bella have such a cute friendship :D im hoping that Edward wont get back together with Bella coz i dont really think it would work in this fanfic. Jake and Bella might work, with Lily 'subtley' prompted at their relatioship, haha :P OR! Bella could meet some of the HP characters and fall in love with them. maybe Sirius or Remus? well, its your choice. and obviously Lily will be with James :] anywho, please, please, PLEASE update soon! x
animaluvr123 chapter 4 . 12/18/2009
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER, UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

HAPPY HOLIDAYS!
Goldenfightergirl chapter 4 . 12/9/2009
um reducto is the blasting curse i think the one u want is reducio
MissA540 chapter 3 . 12/5/2009
Update soon, please, please, please! Lexi.
Blonde Becky x chapter 3 . 11/30/2009
I love this story. Very original.

Please update! x
remember-the-timeline chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
Well written and funny start.

But, er, it's canon in the Harry Potter books that Lily Evans was born in 1960 and died in 1981 when she was 21. While Twilight doesn't have such a fixed timeline, it definitely takes place in the present day what with modern technology like mobile phones which were huge and blocky in the 1980s when Lily died, with no worldwide networks amd so no reception at all in some countries either.

That makes the summary and so premise and plot of your story rather confusing and I'm afraid unbelievable for Harry Potter fans who know enough about canon, as a Portkey does not involve time travel. An acknowledgement of this in an author's note would at least stop nit picky readers like me pointing this out.