|Reviews for A Helping Friend, Helping Fate|
| jh831 chapter 4 . 2/22
been a little over 4 years since you updated
you have 14 reviews, 24 followers to this story. here is a hint...update to get more followers and reviews.
I would love to follow this story, but it doesn't even look like you are on this site anymore, and if you are, you arent writing anything.
so pm me if you are going to update, doubt i will get an answer.
i'm not trying to be mean, but you have a commitment to your followers to give them something.
So ignore this, respond to this, it doesn't matter.
| gossgal33 chapter 4 . 7/11/2013
UPDATE THIS PLEASE!
| Not So Sirius chapter 4 . 11/21/2012
cool. i really like it; it's well writen. more please!
| running.with.wolves chapter 4 . 1/3/2011
this is a good story! dont abandon it!
| Katie-Tails123 chapter 4 . 7/27/2010
i love this book its awsome katiexx
| Vicki219 chapter 4 . 4/19/2010
Aw i feel so sorry for Bella but it's kinda cool that she has Lily as a friend. Hope you update soon
| LilyHeartsMarauders chapter 4 . 3/26/2010
This is a little better I somewhat like Twilight this is good though
| LilyHeartsMarauders chapter 3 . 3/26/2010
Lily should have disapparated with Bella to show she is faster
| bookluvrxoxo chapter 4 . 2/6/2010
this is really good, you always read those stories when they're with HP but i really like it the way you made it into the Marauders golden age
| MissLizziebeth chapter 4 . 1/16/2010
lurrve it so far! Lily and Bella have such a cute friendship :D im hoping that Edward wont get back together with Bella coz i dont really think it would work in this fanfic. Jake and Bella might work, with Lily 'subtley' prompted at their relatioship, haha :P OR! Bella could meet some of the HP characters and fall in love with them. maybe Sirius or Remus? well, its your choice. and obviously Lily will be with James :] anywho, please, please, PLEASE update soon! x
| animaluvr123 chapter 4 . 12/18/2009
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER, UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
| Goldenfightergirl chapter 4 . 12/9/2009
um reducto is the blasting curse i think the one u want is reducio
| MissA540 chapter 3 . 12/5/2009
Update soon, please, please, please! Lexi.
| Blonde Becky x chapter 3 . 11/30/2009
I love this story. Very original.
Please update! x
| remember-the-timeline chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
Well written and funny start.
But, er, it's canon in the Harry Potter books that Lily Evans was born in 1960 and died in 1981 when she was 21. While Twilight doesn't have such a fixed timeline, it definitely takes place in the present day what with modern technology like mobile phones which were huge and blocky in the 1980s when Lily died, with no worldwide networks amd so no reception at all in some countries either.
That makes the summary and so premise and plot of your story rather confusing and I'm afraid unbelievable for Harry Potter fans who know enough about canon, as a Portkey does not involve time travel. An acknowledgement of this in an author's note would at least stop nit picky readers like me pointing this out.