Reviews for Profaned
Kae chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
Beautiful. Sensual. Sad. Vivid. Deep. And again, beautiful. Very good work.
Prince-in-Disguise chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
Well done, really well done!
TT chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
Beautiful .
Saerwen Tabris chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
I loved this. Great work, thank you for sharing.
Eleima chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
That was a very, very beautiful story. Alistair's anguish was absolutely palpable in his endless hauling of the bucket, his dumping of the ice cold water over himself. Masterfully done!

I read your profile, and I'm glad to hear that things are looking up a bit, and I'll be hoping to read more from you!
Viginstein chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
Well done, very intimate and comforting, and a nice departure from the usual sword and shield only story telling;]
Elusive Horizon chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
Beautifully tortured. I love this. Favorite no doubt.
kittensbane chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
That was a very gripping and emotionally charged piece. I kind of hoped for a scene afterwards if one choose to go with Morrigan's option. When I thought about it, I'm sure Alistair would feel this way if the PC was in love with him. Thanks for sharing. :)
Anonymouse chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
Amazing piece. Thank you so much!
Crisium chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
I think I've said this before, but the way you use language is just incredible. It feels like you use words like a painter uses oils, like a sculptor uses clay, and so the end result feels so tangible and vivid that it's just utterly fantastic.

This line:

"wound together like vines grown to unity in front of the fireplace"

Is just so evocative, and so lovely.
waiting4morning chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
The sense of revulsion/attraction that you convey here is very well done. I haven't chosen that ending yet, but the thought of it isn't pleasant. Nice job on conveying the complexity of this choice.
callalili chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
Augh. Angsty angsty angsty, why am I not surprised? I actually couldn't bring myself to watch this cutscene while in-game-skipped right over it, like the coward I am-so I have no idea if Morrigan actually does all of this or not.

Please don't tell me.

Very dark and very emo. I loved it, as always.

Also: my vote is for the Zevran/Tabris fic you may or may not be working on. Fluff? Maybe? Please? XD
impsy chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
This was really excellent. Morrigan taunting Alistair with the "does she do this?" sounds like something she would totally do, and Alistair's thoughts are totally in-character and really well-written. Thank you for sharing. :)