Reviews for Holding You Close
Playing Passerine chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Dark and clever and creepy. Yeah, you suckered me too.
DZR chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
Dude, awesome XD

Really well done.
Ellie 5192 chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
HOLY CRAP! You got me, I'll admit it, you got me... I feel suckered.

Fantastic story. I love it, even if it did catch me...

Well done!
dancing-badly chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
wow. just wow. like...wow. For such a short story, you did more than saga-long ones do. I thought it was definitely Helen you were referring to, but than BAM at the end.

Its actually rather disturbing. It was really romantic and sensual until you figure out that its not completely consensual and a murder. Its creepy. But bravo to you for being able to craft that so beautifully. It was definately what John would have been like - and it brings home how evil he actually was (despite how endearing and captivating he is now).

Fantastic.
Steph-Schell chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
Nicely done. I loved the twist in it. For a second I thought it was John and Helen sharing a romantic moment and he stabbed the woman and I was shocked. Then I read the last line. It was great.
wigglesfunk chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
Wow what a twist! Totally had me, I was like "He stabbed Helen?" Then I read the last line and was blown away. Great story!