|Reviews for Going and Coming|
| Akemi713 chapter 5 . 12/15/2012
The only finished story in this crossover and I loved it. The confusion about where they are throughout made me laugh a lot!
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/17/2012
JUSTICE TO MRS NORRIS!
| EnharmonicAngel chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
I'd probably understand this better if I'd actually seen/read Harry Potter. But I haven't, and am challenging myself to understand this fic. So luck to me 8D
Seems interesting. Again, issues understanding because I haven't seen or read Harry Potter, but seems interesting.
| Tamora Pierce rules chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
I love it sooooooooo much, where did you get the idea?
| Ichigo Mirai chapter 5 . 11/23/2010
this is really good! never expected to read something like this before, but it was really good!
| SakeMuffins4Hisagi chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
I know this doesn't have any constuctive crit, mainly because I couldn't think of anything. That. Was. Awesome.
Now going to read the rest of it :D *runs away*
| KallianaCorus chapter 5 . 8/1/2010
I liked it, I would have liked a little more interation between the characters from diffrent stories but it was still really good :D (and I have only read parts of the first and second Harry Potterlong complicated reasoning for this but I've seen the movie)
| Cindar chapter 5 . 2/26/2010
that was good
| xJunainaxAzharax chapter 5 . 2/5/2010
well... that was just kinda well. without a purpose. sorta boring I guess. I mean, i live the idea of a the immortals harry potter and all, but there wasn't any adventure, or action or reason. nothing special. they just made a mistake, and got home very easily.
| xJunainaxAzharax chapter 4 . 1/29/2010
| Soraya the All Speaker chapter 4 . 1/28/2010
Lol, Numair should have a funnier reaction..XP Still funny though. Nice Alanna thing there
| TheLadySongSerenade chapter 3 . 12/27/2009
lol. this is odd but good. keep writing! btw- I think numair's from carthak- not tyra.
| Escaped Ninja chapter 3 . 12/27/2009
This is still a good story, the only thing is that with wild magic there is more than one kind as it is explained in the first book and Daine only holds one part of wild magic as it says in da first book when Numair flows his gift through her that she sees all kinds iof other magic, such as blue for water or grey for stones. Otherwise this is a good story, keep it up:D
| Soraya the All Speaker chapter 3 . 12/26/2009
Yea advil/ibprofen ish AMAZING STUFF...painkillers FTW saved my life over xmas...
Nice chappie i wanna see Numair show off...
| Our Lady of Dreams chapter 3 . 12/26/2009
great chapter. want more! i wanna see the look on everyone's faces when they see numair use magic or when daine shapeshifts. I can just imagine alanna and ron sitting side by side at a table scarfing down food. actually, i think alanna would probably eat more. keep up the great work, write more soon plz. right now it doesn't have a real plot line but i'm excited for more nonetheless :)