|Reviews for Incubus Anomaly|
| gredelina1 chapter 28 . 2/19
Well that sucked! I get that you wanted to do a Romeo and Juliet kind of ending, but really...? The ending was so abrubt, it wasn't even sad. If you're going to kill them off, at least make it emotional so it leaves the reader with a sense of loss. I've loved this story so much, with the brilliant character development, but now it all seems pointless.
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/29
''I shifted and braked, the beast between my thighs growled then sputtered quiet.''
After reading the prologue, I did not expect the 'BEAST' to be a motorcycle.
| kiwisrock chapter 26 . 1/26
Let the change begin!
Thanks that she had a wonderful relationship with her crew & especially with Jess & Tyler!
| kiwisrock chapter 25 . 1/26
All your footnotes crack me up...
All your intro notes/quotes/recd songs are amazing!
Huge thanks to you & your betas!
| kiwisrock chapter 24 . 1/26
Gulp down the hotness that is Vampward that is!
| kiwisrock chapter 23 . 1/26
I love the way you write so much...it's captivating, enthralling, beguiling...totally sublime to read how you've written these two, thanks somuch!
| kiwisrock chapter 21 . 1/25
| prairie loon chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
Ah, I see you *are* still writing. I'm looking forward to more.
| prairie loon chapter 28 . 12/26/2013
Your writing is wonderful and I loved the story. ,... even though I believe I may be physically ill from the ending. It was your story to tell, even if i wish it were different. Thank you for all the time you devoted to this . I hope you are still writing.
| Guest chapter 28 . 12/23/2013
How awesome you must feel that you ended this on your own terms. I loved this story, until then ending of chapter 28. While beautifully written, the ending was overwhelmingly anticlimactic. While I'm not a fan, at all, of being screwed out of HEAs, there are times when it works. This did not. I felt from the moment Bella was snatched away that it was a race to the finish line. On a side note, people read to escape from their RL lack of HEA. Anything contrary to that, IMO is useless.
| Guest chapter 28 . 12/12/2013
Fuck you. Why? And yeah. well written and whatever... but come on. Come the fuck on.
| Guest chapter 28 . 11/9/2013
Your ending was beautiful don't listen to anyone it's magical
| Guest chapter 28 . 10/31/2013
I must say That I have read hundreds of Twilight fanfics and the this ending is certainly the most anti-climatic one I have seen. It doesn't flow. You have taken away from your story by flinging the ending upon it.
| Dollybigmomma chapter 28 . 10/29/2013
| Guest101 chapter 28 . 10/20/2013
Well that sucked. No where in ch 1 does it say they're Gonna die. I was hoping to see now dark ward & vamp Bella lived a vamp life. Sucked sucked sucked.