Fucking cunt writing shit, so sex crazed in the end that they didn't realise what was happening.

i started reading this and didn’t like it by chapter 6 because it has the WORST case of “tell not show” i have seen. decided to jump to the end to see if i was missing anything… so glad i didn’t continue to waste my time on this pile of garbage.

What a complete waste of my time. Where was the “major character death” warning? It was so rushed at the end that there was no time to be prepared for what could happen. At no point in this story did I think it would end like this, or I wouldn’t have read it. Bella and Edward living isn’t necessarily a HEA, but it would have made all the time you spent writing and me reading worth it. I appreciate authors who give their readers a choice, not take them on a wild useless love/mate story to have them end up dead minutes after Bella is turned. So unsatisfying.

How would E know where B's cabin is located? It doesn't make sense... Ah well

You had to make me cry and kill my mate. I thought another vamp was after B. You are evil and genius wrapped into one.

TMI

Exquisite tourture with a Red bow

Expectanrly unexpected, and so fantastically good. I love stories like these that don't end like you might hope.

Your characters are so well-developed and interesting. The plot is amazing. The writing beautiful. I realize it's been a few years, but thank you for sharing.

I HATE THIS ENDING

So I'm not surprised how this ended. I sort of expected it. I thought the story was really well written.. Thank you for sharing your work. The only thing that could have made this better was knowing who walked away in the end.

I effing LOVE this story! I have a thing for dark Edwards. Yummy!.

Would also like to add, I don’t feel so torn up about this ending in part because I though Edward was cruel throughout. Just the absolute disregard for her emotions at every turn seemed so unsustainable and made me uncomfortable. Only realizing now that that was probably purposeful lol

About half way through this fix I thought, “maybe I already read this years ago”. That often happens to me as I don’t keep track of what I’ve read over the years. Finishing this chapter I’m realizing there’s no way in hell I did, because I would’ve remembered THAT. Thanks for the story! And those lemons… *nwah* chef’s kiss

Why did you have to write the part where he gets a towel from the kitchen and cleans her. I find it disgusting. Kitchen towels ever if they are clean still have their own bacteria. Yucky.

despite knowing the ending, the story really drew me in and i enjoyed it. do wish they would've somehow been able to make it out but it did make sense. ultimately, it didn't deserve any of the vitriol in the reviews. thank you for this!