Reviews for Avatar
shugokage chapter 4 . 12/2/2012
This was definitely an incredible story good job!
shugokage chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
This is an unique and interesting story! Good start!
Guest chapter 4 . 7/7/2012
Well done and true to the characters. Would make a great few episodes of a fourth season of the show!
Kuroui chapter 4 . 6/26/2012
Awww what a great ending! Azula's one of my fav chracters. Great to see her come to terms with her inner demons!

Kuroui
Kuroui chapter 4 . 6/26/2012
Awww what a great ending! Azula's one of my fav chracters. Great to see her come to terms with her inner demons!

Kuroui
AhumbleHalofan chapter 4 . 5/12/2012
Not bad. I enjoyed this I hope you write other fics that I could just as easily enjoy.
Reader101w chapter 4 . 4/16/2012
That was a really good story,

You made Azula's change very believable, and the ending was heartwarming.

One small pointer, jumps in time during the unblocking of Azula's Chakras are barely described, making it seems as if she only stayed there a few days, when the ending suggests she's been there at least several months.

It doesn't interfere with the story flow, but it does give it a bit of a rushed feel.

Nevertheless, great story. If you ever go about writing more Avatar stories, I'll be sure to give it a peek.

Keep up the very good writing that you do,

reader101w
Attila1987 chapter 4 . 4/15/2012
A simple yet beautiful story, it's good to see Azula finally putting her own demons to rest and make peace with herself. Bonus point for adding the help of Pathik, as eccentric and awesome as alway!

It's a bit a shame that the story ended now, I would have loved to see an epilogue showing if she finally regained her firebending. I know that it's not the main focus of your story and, as Pathik said, finding her own way is what truly matter, but now that she seems to have finally found it, that would be her "final absolution", the symbol of the proof that she's not someone to be feared, that she can be trusted with this power. Besides, she's so much of a prodigy that it would be a shame that her talent end up to waste!

Anyway that was a very good story that I enjoyed very much, and I hope to see more from you soon!
grievous27 chapter 4 . 4/15/2012
Amazing story I love how it all workout in the end anyway thank you.
ReadrOfBooks chapter 4 . 4/14/2012
I'm crying now, and I don't even know why...great story.
grievous27 chapter 3 . 4/14/2012
Great story I like it and I look forward to your next update.
Reader101w chapter 3 . 4/14/2012
Great story so far,

Very good depiction on the characters, and great humor to boot.

I really wonder how things will work out for Azula.

I hope to read more on this soon.

Keep up the very good writing that you do,

reader101w
kobez2.0 chapter 2 . 1/23/2011
YAY! More Please?

Geeze im demanding hey ;)

The characterization here is really good. the words they're saying and the way they say them is totally believable. It was writen well enough that it felt more like I was watching an episode than reading a fic. I hope you continue with this story.

-Kobez-
morbus-rus chapter 2 . 12/7/2010
Nice. I prefer more... strong and willful Azula, but yours still good.
bmwrider chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
Great story. I hope you decide to continue on with it.
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