Reviews for First Time
dragon fier 20 chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
:D ha, that was good... :) loved it!
akirak chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
Lol it's super cute!
Angelusdeath chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
Aww its so sweet. I am still pissed that they killed Jack! How could they!
SheSaidAnonymous chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
That was a very cute lusty way you began the story. I myself dislike the white donuts, but now I find myself craving one haha good job.

:) -SheSaidAnonymous-
Loveless-kun12 chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
This was absolutely fantastic! i would recommend putting more detail but it was well made. well done!
YouAreMine21 chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
Love it!
Rayne Fair chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
Finally, a decent Damien/Jack slash lemon! / You made my day with this! Excellent!
EmmAyech chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
Aweh! This was SOO cute! Great job! I love Jack & Damien! :D
SouChouChou chapter 1 . 5/8/2010

Nice :D
dietchola chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
Haha so cute! JackxDamien forever
Joy-Cullen chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
Good job! nice story. Damien and Jack are so cute together...
CaleighCatastrophe chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
The powdered donut idea was genius. The characters were written as if by the authors themselves. great fic!
Aishiteru Girl chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Well.. I always like me some guy on guy action xD

this was so sweet!

damian and jack are just perfect together :D

thanks for writing this!
red fox135 chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
I'm not really one for gay sex...but Jack and Damien are just so cute together! Ah!
PrincessInTheRain chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
Aaw, that was so cute!
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