I'm jittery with the action and adventure that takes place, especially because of how you presented it.

Looking at it grammatically, the way you form sentences, sentence length and all, it doesn't seem different from the general writing style other fics are writen in out there. But when I read it, letting the words wash over me, there is a wholly different atmosphere, full of anticipation swirling silently in me.

(I hope I did more-or-less a passable job of explaining what I felt reading the previous couple of chapters).

What a grim tone you've set to the plot. But I like it.

Fantastic story, I hope you at some point continue to write. Your a well thought-out storyteller.

I'm just reading all your HP fanfiction, and I must tell : you should not have stop.
You have a gift with SS/HP.

I read it not in one day, but whenever I can ! (Not every one home where happy )
I just couldn't stop !
Even if you stop writing HP fanfiction, I hope keep reading your reviews.
You deserve more rewiews ! You deserve to be thanks !

So Thank, I feel a bit sad to discover your Fanfiction nearly 20 years after, but 20 years ago I was not able to read in english so, I shoudln't probably give more strenght to go on.

You stick really well to the characters ! I like it.

I hope you're well, and will follow this story and you, maybe one day an epilogue will come ;) or not.

Okay... with all your apologies at the top of the last few chapters, I can see why this was started in 2002 and ended in 2009... and now you've skipped a good ELEVEN years... Not to worry! at least you didn't leave us off on the LAST chapter...

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

I could handle perma-italics, BUT NOW it's italics AND bold! I am aware you'll probably never see this review, and I won't stop reading, but eurgh it's hard.

YAy! Super-italics are gone! GJ!

Again, perma-italics. This is getting really irritating, I hope it doesn't continue the rest of the story. It always starts out normal, I think it changes the first time you put a word in italics and then just stays the rest of the time.

AGain: perma-italics the whole chapter.

Also, I TOTALLY get Draco cozying up to Snape's son. Makes a ton of sense.

I REALLLLLY LIKE THIS PLOTLINE! The slow, inching progress between Harry and Snape is going BEAUTIFULLY! I LOVE YOUR WRITING! I WANT MORE OF IT! (so I am thrilled there are 47 chapters and devastated that this story isn't marked as complete...)

Also, the last half the chapter is all in italics? I don't mind reading in italics, but it conveys a sense of /different-ness/ if you know what I mean. I keep expecting it to be a dream, or a memory, or something like that.

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH LUPIN STOP THAT SOUNDS EXTREMELY STRANGE AND INSANE AND WEIRD ESPECIALLY SINCE YOUR OWN NAME IS STILL INSIDE HARRY'S HEAD AGGGGHHHH OH MY FREAK THIS IS SO FREAKING FUN I LOVE THIS STORY AEEEEEEEE

GAH! You even MENTIONED Dumbledore has a buncha kids!

(Dumbledore having kids, btw, is NOT canon... so it's really weird... though it is cool... I mean seriously... who was his wife? is she dead or something? maybe Grindelwald killed her, or maybe Voldemort, or - PLEASE don't tell me she's still around?!)

Hi, hi hihihi HELOO!

IS HE GOING TO BE RE-SORTED?!

WOW THIS STORY IS FREAKING AMAZING I LOVE IT!

(And cool touch at the end, calling Harry "Mr Snape.")

I'm looking forward to seeing Harry with TWO IDENTITIES! PLUS BEING AN ANIMAGUS! (my theory is that he's going to turn into that black lion!) PLEASE don't just do the boringness of naming him Harry Snape, nobody would believe Snape named his kid Harry...

I know it's pointless for me to be saying these thigns since you've already written it, but FREAK

YAYYYYYY I LOVED THIS THANK YOU