|Reviews for A Father's Sin|
| Caro chapter 7 . 12/18/2022
I'm jittery with the action and adventure that takes place, especially because of how you presented it.
Looking at it grammatically, the way you form sentences, sentence length and all, it doesn't seem different from the general writing style other fics are writen in out there. But when I read it, letting the words wash over me, there is a wholly different atmosphere, full of anticipation swirling silently in me.
(I hope I did more-or-less a passable job of explaining what I felt reading the previous couple of chapters).
| Caro chapter 6 . 12/18/2022
What a grim tone you've set to the plot. But I like it.
| Fanofagreatmany chapter 47 . 5/5/2022
Fantastic story, I hope you at some point continue to write. Your a well thought-out storyteller.
| marmotte103 chapter 47 . 7/17/2021
I'm just reading all your HP fanfiction, and I must tell : you should not have stop.
You have a gift with SS/HP.
I read it not in one day, but whenever I can ! (Not every one home where happy )
I just couldn't stop !
Even if you stop writing HP fanfiction, I hope keep reading your reviews.
You deserve more rewiews ! You deserve to be thanks !
So Thank, I feel a bit sad to discover your Fanfiction nearly 20 years after, but 20 years ago I was not able to read in english so, I shoudln't probably give more strenght to go on.
You stick really well to the characters ! I like it.
I hope you're well, and will follow this story and you, maybe one day an epilogue will come ;) or not.
| Tiffany Smithi chapter 47 . 12/4/2020
Okay... with all your apologies at the top of the last few chapters, I can see why this was started in 2002 and ended in 2009... and now you've skipped a good ELEVEN years... Not to worry! at least you didn't leave us off on the LAST chapter...
| Tiffany Smithi chapter 26 . 12/4/2020
I could handle perma-italics, BUT NOW it's italics AND bold! I am aware you'll probably never see this review, and I won't stop reading, but eurgh it's hard.
| Tiffany Smithi chapter 25 . 12/4/2020
YAy! Super-italics are gone! GJ!
| Tiffany Smithi chapter 24 . 12/4/2020
Again, perma-italics. This is getting really irritating, I hope it doesn't continue the rest of the story. It always starts out normal, I think it changes the first time you put a word in italics and then just stays the rest of the time.
| Tiffany Smithi chapter 23 . 12/4/2020
AGain: perma-italics the whole chapter.
Also, I TOTALLY get Draco cozying up to Snape's son. Makes a ton of sense.
I REALLLLLY LIKE THIS PLOTLINE! The slow, inching progress between Harry and Snape is going BEAUTIFULLY! I LOVE YOUR WRITING! I WANT MORE OF IT! (so I am thrilled there are 47 chapters and devastated that this story isn't marked as complete...)
| Tiffany Smithi chapter 22 . 12/4/2020
Also, the last half the chapter is all in italics? I don't mind reading in italics, but it conveys a sense of /different-ness/ if you know what I mean. I keep expecting it to be a dream, or a memory, or something like that.
| Tiffany Smithi chapter 21 . 12/4/2020
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH LUPIN STOP THAT SOUNDS EXTREMELY STRANGE AND INSANE AND WEIRD ESPECIALLY SINCE YOUR OWN NAME IS STILL INSIDE HARRY'S HEAD AGGGGHHHH OH MY FREAK THIS IS SO FREAKING FUN I LOVE THIS STORY AEEEEEEEE
| Tiffany Smithi chapter 20 . 12/4/2020
GAH! You even MENTIONED Dumbledore has a buncha kids!
(Dumbledore having kids, btw, is NOT canon... so it's really weird... though it is cool... I mean seriously... who was his wife? is she dead or something? maybe Grindelwald killed her, or maybe Voldemort, or - PLEASE don't tell me she's still around?!)
| Tiffany Smithi chapter 19 . 12/4/2020
Hi, hi hihihi HELOO!
IS HE GOING TO BE RE-SORTED?!
| Tiffany Smithi chapter 10 . 12/3/2020
WOW THIS STORY IS FREAKING AMAZING I LOVE IT!
(And cool touch at the end, calling Harry "Mr Snape.")
I'm looking forward to seeing Harry with TWO IDENTITIES! PLUS BEING AN ANIMAGUS! (my theory is that he's going to turn into that black lion!) PLEASE don't just do the boringness of naming him Harry Snape, nobody would believe Snape named his kid Harry...
I know it's pointless for me to be saying these thigns since you've already written it, but FREAK
| Guest chapter 47 . 11/27/2020
YAYYYYYY I LOVED THIS THANK YOU