Reviews for A Father's Sin
Ra4chel-the 4 is silent chapter 46 . 3/29/2012
Bahhh! I cried soo much when I read this chapter. Damn hormones. *proceeds to eat 4 litres of chocolate ice cream with a shovel*
Ra4chel-the 4 is silent chapter 44 . 3/29/2012
LOL. Little bit of Dramione thrown in there. Me like! :D
Ra4chel-the 4 is silent chapter 39 . 3/29/2012
Can I marry your story? Also, this new Snape. He's sooooooo cute! 3
Ra4chel-the 4 is silent chapter 36 . 3/29/2012
Everytime Harry calls him "dad" I'm just like XD for the next ten minutes. This is honestly like my favourite story now. Can't wait to find out what happens next! :D :D :D
Ra4chel-the 4 is silent chapter 34 . 3/29/2012
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Ra4chel-the 4 is silent chapter 31 . 3/29/2012
LOL. The punch. As bad as I feel for Sev, Sirius DID have to something to him, even if only to make himself feel better. Another brilliant chapter. Can't wait to read the rest of the chapters. Haha damn you for keeping me up all night with your spectacular story.
Ra4chel-the 4 is silent chapter 28 . 3/29/2012
This chapter was perfect. For most of the story, I've had a clear idea in my mind about how Sirius would and should react and this was just...flawless. Best chapter yet! I know I shouldn't say this, since this was obviously a very hard and uncomfortable moment for both of them, but it was just so good that I couldn't help grinning through the whole thing. Amazing job!
Ra4chel-the 4 is silent chapter 19 . 3/29/2012
ten kids, sixteen grandkids, and eight great grandkids, huh? Oh, the things we didn't know about back then. (I.e. Dumbledore's gayness)
Ra4chel-the 4 is silent chapter 12 . 3/29/2012
Wow. I didn't notice when this story was published until I saw your comment about "THE Harry Potter movie" and I'd just like to say bravo! Okay, yes, you were wrong about Snape being Harry's father, but he did have a major crush on her, which is close enough. I didn't figure out anything myself. Although that may be because I saw movies 1-7 first and then someone told me that Snape had a thing for Lily before i read the books. And they cut out that part about Snape and Lily in the memory scene of movie five...
Ra4chel-the 4 is silent chapter 9 . 3/28/2012
As a Snape fan, I have to point out that technically, Harry is the bastard. Sorry, but I couldn't just sit there and let Harry and Ron say things like that about my Sevvie-poo!

Thought: I wonder what Snape would hate more; being called a greasy bastard, or being called Sevvie-poo...
Ra4chel-the 4 is silent chapter 7 . 3/28/2012
This is such an amazing story.
Ra4chel-the 4 is silent chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
Seems like a really interesting story so far. I've always wanted to write a Snape-is-Harry's-father fic before, but I don't think I'd be able to do the subject justice because I'm not an amazing writer. I can't wait to keep reading and find out what happens. This is the best story I've read on the subject so far. :)

On a side note, isn't Fera Verto the spell McGonagall uses to turn an animal into a water goblet? Not sure if you realized you were just reversing that spell when you came up with the one to transform into an animagus or not, so I thought I'd point it out.
gingerninja713 chapter 19 . 3/26/2012
Great story but I was just curious as to why some words have / / around them
Adriana Espan chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
Great story OMG! I love it.
TRIC4R chapter 47 . 3/21/2012
Love it..epi?
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