Reviews for A Father's Sin
unknown chapter 2 . 1/20/2002
good so far.
MercS chapter 1 . 1/19/2002
Wow, brilliant start to the story.

This looks like it's going to be really good.

Can't wait to find out what happens next, wonder who the lost brother is, my bets on Harry though I guess it could be Snape too.

Please post more soon, I can't wait to read the next bit :)
blackwolfdidn't sign in chapter 1 . 1/19/2002
that's really good.I can't wait to find out who becomes what animal and what happened with Lily
Yami no Kaiba chapter 1 . 1/19/2002
*Growls low in her throat.* Tease. Leaving a cliffhanger when you have more material already done is kinda mean.
Coesius chapter 1 . 1/19/2002
Beautiful!

I truly can't wait for the next chapter! You've really been "seting up for all the twists and surprised you have planned" in this chapter. So many things to wonder about!

What happened to Lily?

Who is the wolf and the lion?

I guess Snape is the 'lost' brother of the Serpent's Children eh?

as i said, it is great so far and as long as you don't end up with a HP/SS slash pairing(yuck!IMHO -not the slash part but the pairing), i will surely be following this story.

love, coesius
ClynicalBrat chapter 1 . 1/19/2002
I really loved it! Truly amazing story! keep it up...it's great to see that there are still good aspiring writers out there!
sev's-gurl chapter 1 . 1/19/2002
MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MROE
Gen Raid chapter 1 . 1/18/2002
I agree with the other two. You've totally left us hangin. What does this mean, does it mean more of the Harry isn't James son or does this mean his Mum had something done to her? Is the image he saw part of a joke that happened to her? If it isn't what the heck is happening? Should I be hiding in my closet in fear?
Blackletter chapter 1 . 1/18/2002
An interesting beginning. Please, post more.
Cream Rose chapter 1 . 1/18/2002
ummm, I suck at reviews, basically, this is a great story and I can't wait to find out what animals they are going to be, keep up the good work _
Witchmaster chapter 44 . 11/27/2004
-grins- I loved that last bit, a nice humor break. It was great. Who would have thought Draco would be a horse, and an Arabian at that?
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