| Reviews for A Father's Sin |
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   Asphodel74 chapter 47 . 4/15/2019 I just finished reading your story. I normally don't like Snape-is-Harries-father stories or Animagus stories but somehow the fact that this story would contain even both elements slipped by starting the story - and I'm really glad it did as the story is really great! It is very original but still the persons are quite in character and the plot seems very likely. Furthermore your writing is very capturing. I simply couldn't stop reading once started. |
| Guest chapter 47 . 1/3/2019 To the guest author who reviewed September 2018: That’s really cool that you read 23 whole chapters before you decided it was a “waste of your time” and instead of moving on, you decided to spend even more time to rudely berate the author, who died years ago, like a child. I hope you look back on that review and vow to do better with your existence in the foreseeable future. |
| Guest chapter 36 . 11/2/2018 Just destroy the evil book then! Why keep it? Honestly... |
| DarthLeia19 chapter 47 . 9/29/2018 Woow I have no words to describe such an amazing history, I love it from starting to end . Thank you so much ! |
| Guest chapter 23 . 9/25/2018 Renaming Harry to Zachary is the stupidest thing you could do to this story. You’re essentially turning an established character into an original character, and everybody hates original characters—for a good reason. Had I known this, I would have never wasted my time reading the first part of your crappy story. Also, your writing is sloppy. You need to edit the punctuation and capitalization, as half of it is wrong. |
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/25/2018 I don’t get it. Why is Severus able to walk into this prison? Isn’t it guarded/ |
| Wika0304 chapter 47 . 2/18/2018 please update |
| Redhood11686 chapter 9 . 2/12/2018 can I ask what all the forward slashes are, they are either that or in other chapters it starts in the middle of the sentence it can be quite confusing. |
| Navyangel85 chapter 1 . 1/17/2018 You named him after luscious lol this going be one hell of a roller coaster |
| megacharizat chapter 40 . 12/27/2017 what the fuck? snape is the black lion? |
| megacharizat chapter 20 . 11/18/2017 Dumbledore is a moron and a fool. |
| megacharizat chapter 13 . 11/18/2017 fuck, fuck, fuck. how the fuck is he going to fucking escape? |
| jaron5 chapter 4 . 11/13/2017 Oh oh I think I know. In the beginning it shows Lily being kidnapped by death eaters, so Snape probably took Lily and asked her permission and they made Harry I think:) total random guess but I'm curious |
| jaron5 chapter 3 . 11/13/2017 R they like Voldemort's children? I'm a bit confused, oh well I'll read more. Great beginning btw |
| Hidden.Forever chapter 32 . 8/31/2017 Yeah I'm quite sure, as I have been from the beginning, that Harry is the Wolf and Snape is the lion, in animagus form :P |