Reviews for Baby Blues
jk chapter 2 . 9/20/2016
there quite a few grammar mistakes that make your characters sound like fucktards...but whatever

and this whole...dark cloud crap...sounds like just that...crap
Guest chapter 6 . 5/31/2014
Are you Scottish by any chance? Sooked instead of sucked and as I've only read this chapter (as a spot check as to whether it's worth reading) mines instead of mine. As a Scot myself I'm very aware of the Scottish dialect but would never use it in writing works. Perhaps you are unaware of the proper use of the English language and can only write in Scottish slang. That's a shame because it could have been a very good story. I don't think I will be reading any more.
Contemplative chapter 15 . 4/3/2014
The story's good but the gramatical and spelling errors are kinda distracting.
elizabeth bennette chapter 5 . 2/25/2014
Hi just starting to read the story. Bit confused with this Edward? Bipolar?
Guest chapter 2 . 8/4/2013
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little vampire 93 chapter 30 . 12/4/2012
i have really enjoyed reading this story and especially the meaning behind it...
its a really really good story
Guest chapter 11 . 10/7/2012
It is like having a brown eyed parent and a blue eyed geneticly you should have 3 out 4 Brown eyed children just because brown is domanate but it doesn't always happen that way I have 1 brown and 3 blue.
vickilouise chapter 30 . 8/2/2012
Beautiful sequel. :-)
cinewardy chapter 30 . 5/28/2012
I LOVE THIS! You did such a greaatt job! Congrats :)
junners chapter 30 . 3/8/2012
Great story
sjstar chapter 30 . 1/28/2012
this two fanfic are some of the best I ever read, thank you for them!
albadolores chapter 30 . 1/8/2012
I really enjoy this story, sometimes i feelt the tiredness, and the angryness of both Bellward,you writing is very interesting, and love the bella and eward POV. thnk you.
ickaren chapter 30 . 12/10/2011
I am so happy to see them happy. Edward has grown so much, matured into a wonderful husband and father, even if he does spoil them a little. Life doesn't have guarantees, and sometimes we need to take a chance and go for it! Thank you for sharing your story, you are a talented story-teller.
ickaren chapter 29 . 12/9/2011
Oh yes, I liked that, finally getting back to a lemon...and plans. It is good to accept some help-parenting can be very intense. And we do need to expect some bad with the good, so always treasure the good.
ickaren chapter 28 . 12/9/2011
A new baby is got that right! And then his diagnosis upset both of them...they were so hoping...
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