|Reviews for Secure the Blessing|
| A Child Of Ares chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
This was just, amazing. I'm surprised you haven't gotten more reviews with such a wonderful fiction. This made my day, thank you for that.
| PuzzledBookie chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
I just loved this so much and am fuckin' starvin' for more!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
My friend told me this was a good fanfic.
But Gosh this is such an awsome story...
| OogaBooga1234 chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
this is a beautiful story :3
| Michigan chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
| Sparkiebunny chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
Wow, what a unique and FANTASTIC idea...I love how you tore the brothers apart, only to have them find each other again. So true to the Winchester relationship! Funny, sad, beautifully phrased, and brilliantly written. Superb work! :)
| spnlittlebro chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
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| Giacinta chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
I just discovered your story ad I really enjoyed it.
When a story has given you a few hours pleasure I think it's only right to let the author know.
I enjoyed the whole concept, and Dean's ghost making his own wish to remember everything was a good idea.
Poor Dean though, growing up with the fixed need to find Sam in his head!
I liked how you just showed Sam waiting calmly for Dean to show up in the end; waiting for the now inevitable meeting with his brother.
Thanks for sharing. :)
| Rae Montgomery chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
I loved this! But it was so sad that Sam and Dean didn'y grow up together, they missed out on so much more extra time. At least they found each other in the end. And Squonk, that was just the perfect ending, absolutely hilarious name. :)
| TiannaMVA chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
You never mentioned Ash again. D:
I wish you would make a snapshot sequel to this. Just little things like them being mistaken for a gay couple again, that's always funny.
| Moydra chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
First off, I have to mention that I almost did not read this fic. I have a distaste for wish worlds in general. After flitting past it though I found myself coming back to it and giving it a chance. I am very glad I did. You made it complex, yet believable and the voices were excellent.
Dean's desperation to reunite with his brother from the moment things reset was heartbreaking, especially when he realized that his new sibling was NOT going to be Sam. I can so see Dean making it his life mission to reclaim the brother that he's never known in this new life of his.
| putmoneyinthypursenotsignedin chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
"See, the thing is? A lifetime of Mom and Dad and normal and home versus a lifetime of pain and blood and loss and Sam, and there's no freakin' contest because one has Sam and the other doesn't. His brother's a total retard if he thinks otherwise. "You're something else, aren't you Sam?"
I just... Wow. I... Wow.
I want Mom to be alive. I want Dad to be alive. I want Dean to be alive. I want them to have a home and be safe and I want to remember all of this so I'll be able to protect them if something comes after them. I don't want Mom to die and I don't want Dad to ever have to teach Dean how to be a soldier and...
And I don't want to be there with them, because supernatural shit is drawn to me.
Oh, break my heart, why don't you? I just... That's so sad. So very, very sad, and wonderful.
"That'll do, Sammy," the jinniyah says softly and there's a touch like a whisper against his forehead and the world stops and rearranges itself just for him."
And that, "a touch like a whisper", "the world stops and rearranges itself..." So very epic, and so gentle, and so shattering, and with no fanfare, omg. And...
(And the comedy, Missouri seeing herself dancing naked in Dean's head over the phone. And dean's voice and Sam's voice, so perfect, and the Dr. Seuss book, broke my heart and melted me, and Abigail's skimpy top, EEEEEEE! And the parents being oh-so-so understanding of Dean's homosexuality, JEEBUS! I DIED! You are the BOMB!)
The jinniyah is one of her "kind, all tricky phrases and fire born impulsiveness, so when the ghost touches the little bit of bone and hide that passes for her talisman right as she makes the world fall away in favor of one twenty five years ago, she grins in delight and gives him a gift.
She hopes he's happy with it."
Yeah, she likes him. I love her. Her name is, um, how about Morgana, or Delilah? Or Kahramana?
"Sam gives a little nod to the ashtray when he says it, and the chunk of frosted glass wiggles in delight; there's a ghost trapped there, a little boy who says his daddy hit him too hard with the tray one day, but as he watches a soft glow surrounds it and the ghost is gone.
Children are the easiest to appease."
Just - as an episode that isn't skimped on, although it could be ex[anded into a story all on its own self, but the spareness, the clipped delivery, are damn perfect, perfect, and "the chunk of frosted glass" really brings home the shape and solidity" and "wiggles in delight" is so childish and sweet, and the " a little boy who says his daddy hit him too hard with the tray one day" - that 'who says' tells us without spelling it out that Sam has these powers, and breaks our hearts in the process, and "soft glow" - that adj, that noun, all the tenderness in the 'soft' and all the joy and etherealness of the released soul in the 'glow' - it is a tour de force. Truly, omg. I just - I can't. And the image of Sam in that field and the shirt for the trucker's daughter, and ... The love, the love, the love, transcending life and death and everything in between.
| putmoneyinthypursenotsignedin chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
OMG. OMG. OMG. OMG.
This is... beyond amazing. OMG. I'm only halfway through reading,a nd notsigned in because I want to tell you how amazing you are later, but... Oh, that world. You're taking me through the years iand into their heads and I'm just gutted. OMG.
Going back to reading, I'm at the little-Sam-adult-and the ashtray, omg the ashtray, "children were the easiest to appease." And how did you know a female Jinni is a Jinneya, omg, nobody knows that. You're...
I have to know what happens next. I'm - my heart's warmed and broken and ripped apart, and just for now, I think you need to rate this T, there's nothing M about it and it's such a shame that more peaople can't read htis, it's EPIC and head and shoulders above the other fic otu there.
| sam.dexter.ryan chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
think it's the second time I've read this, but it still got the same pull on me :D