Reviews for Becoming Bella
treena-ivy-carter chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
I like the jumbled-ness. It's a bit sketchy in the sort-of making sense in a screwed up way-way. If that makes sense.

Coolio.

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Vivian Junior chapter 7 . 8/3/2010
are you going to keep this story going, I'd love to see what happens.
liztucker17 chapter 7 . 2/12/2010
really good! :) xx
Mallory83 chapter 7 . 2/8/2010
wow...i want to know what happened to...update soon!
ReluctantRomantic chapter 7 . 2/7/2010
It's such a relief to read a story where Bella is acting her age and in accordance with her circumstances rather than like a victim, martyr, virginal, or emo. I'm also enjoying the interactions between her and each of her new friends - obviously Edward, but the relationship she has with Jasper is also interesting.

Nice job!
bamagal110 chapter 6 . 2/5/2010
Holy cow I so hope you don't leave it there for long, I gotta know what they say...It will be very interesting to say the least. Is Alice gonna end up with Jasper..O man I could not stand if I got to sleep with Jasper and Edward your Bella is a very lucky girl!
VampairePrincess chapter 6 . 2/1/2010
ADD MORE I LUV IT!
Mallory83 chapter 6 . 1/31/2010
hehehe when does alice and jasper hook up?
Mallory83 chapter 5 . 1/31/2010
:-) i love this story
Mallory83 chapter 4 . 1/18/2010
Please update soon! Love it
liztucker17 chapter 4 . 1/17/2010
really good!

looking forward to the next chapter :) xx
liztucker17 chapter 3 . 12/30/2009
great story :) xx
Team Alice-Bella chapter 3 . 12/23/2009
Alice and Bella are gonna be a couple of trouble makers aren't they? LMAO love it! cant wait for more! -
Team Alice-Bella chapter 2 . 12/18/2009
lmao love it! cant wait for more! -
liztucker17 chapter 2 . 12/10/2009
please update asap :)

really good tbh :) xx
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