Reviews for Failed Connection
finlaure chapter 2 . 12/2/2009
I remember that I was even more moved by the emotions that Jethro had of being practically betrayed by his "team" than the love scene, and believe me, that love scene is one of the hotest out there that I have ever read.
pfyre1 chapter 3 . 12/2/2009
ah - poor Gibbs and poor Tony... it would be difficult to be immortal and to know that those you love and care about cannot know because they will not understand...

I was almost afraid that Ducky and the others would stage an 'intervention' on Tony and try to forcibly keep him away from Gibbs... This is better in the long run even if it means that they're back to being their own secret keepers as it were...

thanks for this...

and you wanted some suggestions for future storylines for our favourite vampire and his lover...

how about what would happen if Tony went missing? disappeared during a case/during an undercover op/kidnapped? Gibbs's protective instincts would be in hyperdrive...

or what would happen if Abby and/or Ducky and/or McGee - sorry not going there with Ziva detest the character - somehow figure out that Tony and Gibbs are together - after the memory erasure - maybe don't quite realize that Gibbs is a vampire but they see Gibbs's dominance over Tony, etc. and they stage a sort of intervention - thinking that Tony is letting himself be brainwashed by Gibbs into having a relationship with his boss - that of course Tony could never be interested in his boss - a man - that way, blah blah blah - somehow I don't think either Tony or Gibbs would react well to that...

how about what happens when years down the line it is time for Gibbs to retire - does Tony stay on at NCIS maybe heading the team? Gibbs still in D.C. area of course if that is the case... with Tony's increased lifespan - they could easily wait until it is time for Tony to retire and then both go off traveling... or if Tony's still working and Gibbs retired - and something happens to Tony while he and his team are on a case... could see Gibbs not being happy being out of the loop...
angeleyes46 chapter 2 . 12/1/2009
keep up the great work
Kateri1 chapter 2 . 12/1/2009
Wow, very hot
arialee chapter 2 . 12/1/2009
loved this chapter! hope the rest of the gang comes to their senses... even if they are doing it out of concern for Tony. thanks for the update!
Gibbs4Eva chapter 2 . 12/1/2009
Like the action? Of course! Looking forward to seeing what happens when Gibbs meets the others after their conversation with T!
nighttime writer chapter 2 . 12/1/2009
That is NOT rated T. That being said I could understand Tony's need to be physically intimate with Jethro after the whole "movie night" fiasco with Abby. I think this was wonderfully written, I'm glad that I didn't read this around my little niece or nephew, but this was overall great.
PuckurtPartieLover chapter 2 . 12/1/2009
Well that was a lovely wake up email. Keep those chapters coming. No pun intended.
pfyre1 chapter 2 . 12/1/2009
oh - damn that was hot! really hot! and I'm glad that Tony and Gibbs are on the same page about their relationship and how they are with each other - and damn the others for making Tony feel uncomfortable and angry...


can't wait until the next installment!
WCUGirl chapter 2 . 12/1/2009
Good God that was hot! I love this AU you're writing...too bad their friends have to be such assholes. I hope that there comes a time when Jethro has to leave because of who he is that he takes Tony with him. :) 2 updates in 2 days! YAY Can we go 3 for 3? :)

Love Jen
Gloworm41 chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
Whoa - you go Tony. This group deserved everything he said and more. It will be interesting to see Gibbs reaction to the nights events. Looking forward to your next chapter please update soon!
finlaure chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
Wow! Even more powerful than when I was prereading it. I love it and can't wait for what I know is coming up... soon please.
nighttime writer chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
Interesting. I was wondering if they were going to freak out or if they were really going to take it in strides like suggested in the other story. This is a good start. I'd love to hear how Jethro feels about this. Update soon.
Phoenix Red Lion chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
Wow! Nice job! I was wondering if your 'failed connection' would be along these lines. Poor Tony. Sure it was an insult on both he and Jethro, but it was more an insult on him. Tony has proved numerous times that while he does want to please Gibbs, he is still a very independent thinking and completely in charge of his own life. The fact that his friends have forgotten that is pure insult to Tony. Hopefully he'll explain that to them instead of just thinking it.

Great job! Looking forward to the next bit!
Gibbs4Eva chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
Can't wait to see who feels sorry first! I'm surprised Abby had such a hard time with it all - she usually idolizes Gibbs! More soon please!
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