Reviews for Underneath
Guest chapter 1 . 5/14/2015
One of My reviews is missing... T_T

pretend that you got one HUGE you're awesome and this is beautiful Review...

Teacuppy... (since we can't review the same chapter more than once, I had to log out)
Guest chapter 1 . 5/14/2015
I have REread this several times, each time it got better and better.

This is one perfect one-shot of well developed and described KakaNaru moments /love and so much more ...

There is a lot of my favorite lines throughout it. But It would be a long review if I would to write them all.

Opening and Closing pic is perfect - with Kakashi thinking.
I mean everything is so perfect.

The way you write is so magical. And you make us create the beautiful picture in our head during reading.

I am left STARVING for more of this universe. At least One more one - shot... with them talking and loving each other...

This is so appealing...

I am in love with this.

It truly deserves hell of a lot more reviews.

I have to mention that 'magical' mutual moment between them... (Anything could have happened then...when they were just two people caring for each other and could feel other's emotions so well... Kakashi was open... showed subtly how he is craving for love...and Kakashi let him in... except when they Woke up and realized that they are the Shinobi in that moment late for mission... and the spell was broken... )

LOVED this as well

" Naruto sighed … he didn't know whether he'd get another chance with Kakashi like that ever again … Kakashi had been so … open then … his eyes had begged Naruto then … Kakashi had practically invited Naruto … his defenses were all down that morning. For once, Kakashi had pleaded, though not in words … but loud enough for Naruto to hear"

omg loved it...

also... the way Kakashi knew that he is loved by him... and his wounds were healed... 3

If you ever feel like it... pls write more... It's greatly appreciated...

You deserve so much more audience.

I already reviewed once, but I am always awful at expressing my thoughts... especially because english is not my native lang. but I tried my best so that I can let you know.


with so much feeeeelZ...

thousand LIKES for this.

KakaNaru is so underAppreciated pairing...

If people can only open their eyes and see how well they fit together. They make such amazing couple. And

here with just a relatively short fic... you captured that essence so well... you captured that Huge potential they have so perfectly... Beautifuly...

Because of that I want to THANK YOU VERY MUCH

and also wish you the best. And hope you're well. take care, and pls never abandon writing.

Lots of Love from Teacuppy. :-D
KitElizaKing chapter 1 . 5/14/2015
This was a lovely, touching story, one that affected me very greatly. I liked the way that Naruto and Kakashi met in that moment, their eyes, their bodies, all in complete agreement as to what they wanted from each other. I was very impressed by the way that Naruto matured to accept those feelings, and to not deny them...but to push forwards and pursue them. I also appreciated that Kakashi didn't bolt, either. That he, too, wanted to pursue what was between he and Naruto. All in all, this is a very effective and moving story, and I'm glad that a friend recommended it to me. Thanks for writing!
SupernaturalHearts chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
This was so heartfelt and you stayed pretty close to the characters personalities. I hope there is more to this.
Teacuppy chapter 1 . 8/8/2014
this was so good, and deep. Too bad there is no more, I was looking forward to more KakaNaru moments, they are so perfect together. :-) Maybe you'll write more someday...
duchessme chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
Too bad
it was such a wonderful fic
Venus914 chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
Please update... i love the way you write and i love your story too. I wish i can be as good as you. ) Im curious about the letter...
Slyther88 chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
I loved it! please continue this story, it has so much potential :D
chobits909 chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
guh. please. continue. this. story. GUH! you can't leave it like that! this was great chapter but... need more! :) keep it up
Lhoran chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
I love it ). You're descriptions of everything is just so good. The way you characterize Kakashi makes him so real and so amazing.

I love how he's this tortured and beautiful soul. There are so many memorable images in this story, particularly when he's standing on the Hokage monument and the moment between him and Naruto.

I find this could be a well-done one-shot with a great ending, or you could add more chapters. There are so many possibilities and find myself slightly speechless at just how good this is.

You managed to put so much more into Kakashi than simply aloof or perverted while staying true to him.

Sincerely hoping you write more,

uzumaki rakku chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
it's a good fic - awesome characterization, language and emotional play and all.

but... you reeeeeeeeally need to do something about the punctuation. seriously. you're using "..." EVERYWHERE! it breaks the flow of the language and ruins what is supposed to be a reallyreally good fic.

um, I can beta it for you, if you want...?

otherwise, it was a good fic and will you eventually post more? (:
Oracle Oci chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
wow! awesome writing, really brings out the characters emotions without adding unnecessary details; love how the moments just freeze in time :)
Anna Li chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
I really love it! It's beautiful and so deep, I don't have words to describe it! I look forward to your next chap! will there be more right? please

hehe... now this it's going to be one of my fav KakaNaru o

keep up the good work!
xLoveless19 chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
i love kakanaru! and you did a good job on writing this! keep it up and i look forward to your next chap! ;D
Narukashi666 chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
...Wow. All I have to say is... wow. This is absolutely beautiful! I'm inspired now, damn it! XD I love it, I love it, I love it! *glomp*

Umm... will there be more? :D
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