Reviews for The Return |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i hope you decide to finish this story! i'm a big fan of the angst and really love where you have gone with the plot |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow just found this story and I really like it. Can't wait for the next chapter and when Edward turns into a vamp, at least I hope he does. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really enjoying this story. I hope you plan to finish it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oH, i am loving this story! I can't wait to read more... so heart breaking ... so fun... an interesting twist... I really dig it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! It is so unique and so moving. I love the emotional intensity. I am so excited for the next chapter! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Thanks for the update. I hope you update again soon since you left us at that. Poor Edward. I can totally sympathize for him. I lost my dad at the age of 7. For a few years after that, I had such vivid dreams of him that I thought he had really returned. I know, crazy. But I missed him so much. I'd wake from my dreams and run to the living room, turning all the lights on as I went, only to find it empty. I think I probably freaked my mother out on those night. So I can understand what's it's like to miss someone so much, especially your spouse. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ! :) This is fantastic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just discovered your story and the first chapter completely blew me away! Usually when I start a new story I wait until the last posted chapter to review, but your first chapter moved me so much that I just had to tell you! It is a rare and special writer who can pull a reader in right from the very start and make them feel deeply for the characters. My heart broke for Edward-especially the part where he said he was counting down the days til he died. That part gave me chills and made me get a little teary-eyed. Your storyline is so unique and I can't wait to read the rest! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey Girls! You do it again. Great chapter! I hate Jake-dog guts with my life...I can't help it and just now I wish him a painful death...(even canine distemper would do it for me...)just saying! Thanks for the update and for share your talent with us! Big hugs from Argentina |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just discovered this today - I really like the twist. Looking forward to more updates! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just found this story. I like the twist of turn. Bella as vamp and Edward as human. Very interesting. Hope you update regularly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah! Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm, I like it so far! this could be interesting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey Guys! I'm not new to this story because I'm reading it on Twilighted. But I wanted to say that I LOVE TR. It has everything, angst, heartbreak, love and every character fit on the plot just perfectly. Broken-widower-Edward makes my heart suffer and longing for Bella to return! So, Congrats! You make a perfect team, and I love your work, all of it! Thanks for share with us. Kisses from Argentina. |