|Reviews for Fire and Ice: Year 2|
| pottermania bis chapter 4 . 1/6/2013
Lessons from Snape, awesome!
| sesshomaruluver1 chapter 13 . 4/22/2012
I have to say I enjoyed reading Fire and Ice year 2 but think you may have to do some major editing and rewritting. I hope you don't see this as a flame, as if you do rewrite this I look forward to re-reading it.
| GothKat2SlashFan chapter 13 . 4/4/2012
…are you going to rewrite this one anytime soon? Not that it's not good, it's just… more of a plot outline than an actual story…
| TheDevilsDaughter267 chapter 13 . 6/9/2011
good story! a bit short, but a good story. i like the way haylee gets along with snape, thats a nice twist!
| Muggle-Born Gleek chapter 2 . 4/2/2011
I can't even read anymore or i will go crazy! Really, you finished your first story in about 2 weeks and got reviews that really could have improved your writing, but you completly ignored them. SLOW DOWN AND TAKE AN EXTRA DAY OR TWO TO WRITE AN ACTUAL CHAPTER AND NOT A SUMMARY! Last time I checked, this was fanfiction and not rewrite J.K. Rowling's stories with an extra charcter, but lacking her talent in writing. If you want an example look at my Harry Potter stories. My one with only one chapter is as long as your first story! This may seem cruel, but it is the plain truth!
| Muggle-Born Gleek chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Short, choppy, vauge, and completly boring.
| Disabled Profile chapter 13 . 12/28/2010
" Oh shit " is right!
| bloodybloodyrists666 chapter 13 . 9/23/2010
I was wrong it can get worse. i couldnt even make it through this one. I had to just skip to the end, it was that bad.
I'm debating to even consider reading your third.
| LittleCannibalisticEyeshot chapter 13 . 2/5/2010
God i love it chaps are little small but still...
| incrediblygiftedfaker chapter 4 . 12/22/2009
more! more! more! i want more! great story! i love haylee!