|Reviews for Dirty Little Secret|
| robsfantasy chapter 1 . 2/13
Just found this story and just wanted to say thanks! I always thought there was a back story between Edward and Garrett, love the way you told it!
| addicted-to-romione-bedward chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
*drool* Thank you! He's so hot and your story was even hotter.
I wonder what might happen if they join Garrett and Kate...hmm the possibilities.
| GLee68 chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
ooooh I that was HAWT...
I could see some more G/E smexin... (foursome with B/K would be something ELSE!)
| Lori94 chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
| TwilightGuru09 chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
mmmmm Garrett. I have always liked him.
| BBSapphire24 chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
O Edward and Garrett!
LOL "a chance he'd come" - nice!
Stroking his beard…. gah! Manly Garrett!
And…. hello Bella! Eep, talk about awkward moments!
Nice description of Garrett, very mountain man, very attractive.
I liked how Garrett swung from the branches while talking to Edward, I'm loving his personality.
LMAO. Sorry but his convo with Edward, about pleasing human woman, is something i would totally expect from a non PG *eyeroll at SM* Garrett!
Great description of the lake, I specifically like the "vegetation swayed in the lakebed".
Fabulous description of Edward jumping and "slicing" through the water.
OMG! I love jay Garrett teases him!
whoa. Just the word 'Feel' coming from Garrett in the position, tone and such, made a huge impression.
wow. You, woman, write an amazing blow job. That was hot, omfg.
OMG…Edward, Bella, Garrett…(and Kate) please tell me you writing that?
JFC! *finishes google search* Please write, Garrett, Bella and Edward? Fuck it, Garrett and Bella would be hot!
Great one-shot! Loved it!
| vampireisthenewblack chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
Loved it, well done!
| Dahlia J Black chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
If the nominations for the Bellies was still open I would SO nominate this. It just felt completely right and believable.
I love how you described Garrett (and thank you very much for the Taylor Kitsch visual) and how you made him so incredibly lovable and irresistible.
I also liked how perfectly you captured Edward and his uptightness, but how awesome it was when he let go.
(OMG the rock chipping and the hair grabbing just KILLED me. DED)
This was really great. Thanks for sharing this little insight. I think I'm making it canon in my mind now ;)
LOVE you 3
| peanut-5000 chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
oh yummy its like a dream come true luv u garrett
| amp23 chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
missed chance to vote but just wanted to tell you how much i enjoyed your story! great job!
| chele681 chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
This was an intriguing glimpse into a possible past for Edward. The transitions between past and present were flawless and used effectively.
I was impressed by the way you retained both Edward and Garrett's masculinity while exploring Edwards innocence and capitalizing on Garrett's spirit of adventure. “Freedom is the ability to lose yourself in pleasures of life – all the faces of good, exciting, arousing things.” He's so convincing here.
In addition to the smut, which is well done, I see so many layers to this quick story and I found the title to be so appropriate. It's refreshing that you were able to put Edwards first sexual experimentation in this context,without sensationalizing it. I think that canon Edward would have kept his early sexual experimentation as his "secret" regardless of the participants gender.
Thanks so much for sharing the boys' adventures.
Hint: Sure would love a follow-up w/ B/E/G/K.
| ArcadianMaggie chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
Well damn! I didn't think Edward had it in him. ;-) Of course your wild sexy freespirited Garrett would be very hard to resist. I know I wouldn't have been able to. I really enjoyed your story!
| C-Me-Smile chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
Teal! Oh Sweetie, this was just luscious! :D The sly, sensual teasing and that sense of fun, adventure, daring - these gorgeous, sexy men - wow! *brain melt* Seriously, so hot!
I adore your Garrett - he's sexy as hell, a rugged, manly charmer of a flirt, a roguish good guy with a wild streak. I think said wild streak, that desire for new experiences, new pleasures ;), fits in perfectly with his nomadic existence, his adventurous ways - beautifully done!
Speaking of beautiful, as always, your writing is incredible - the rich descriptions, the earthy sensuality, the humor and the honest emotionality (especially the way you capture Edward's swirl of emotions - that conflicting desire to experience, which makes sense given his questing, intelligent nature, coupled with his hesitancy given his inexperience; his surprise and pleasure and pensive desire to suss things out, to get to the bottom of them - all of them wonderfully evident in here) - all luring the readers in, captivating us!
This was incredible! A warm, sexy, gorgeous story! Loved it, BB! :D
| Kats Flower Girls chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
Garrett, oh so sexy!
| eli-dunbigboot chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
I like it! Nice story!