Reviews for Hide and Seek
Clovergirl100 chapter 2 . 11/5/2011
Aww! Just like Fuuko hand on Tokiya's chest it warmed my heart plzz write more can not wait what you have in store, I totally understood what u r doing and you are right about the falling and the grab and pull to the chest is over used. I like ur work
Clovergirl100 chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
Very cute ... Well I am off to the next chapter wonder what fuuko threw at Tokiya ..hehe
forbiddenME024 chapter 2 . 6/27/2011
end of chapter 2. wew! cant help but to laugh with Tokiya holding Fuuko's collar.. hahaha! what a scene. it really made me laugh! please post the next chapter.. gambatte! pilipino ka? pilipino ka? wew! galing mu po ,)v
forbiddenME024 chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
i am also amused with the story.. hehe. it is very cute, hope there will be more chapter.. cant wait to read them all. gambatte!
satomika chapter 1 . 9/26/2010

that was supposed to be struck...

satomika chapter 2 . 9/26/2010
i love it!

hope you update again!

and soon!
satomika chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
your opening quote stroke me...

while i was reading this, my dad was watching discovery channel, and the topic was something related to the big bang theory...

i like the quotes though...
Cagalli Yula Athha Fangirl chapter 2 . 12/28/2009
I love it I love it I love it! OCC shmocc! who cares it's always OCC cuz it's fanfiction and you're writing your own story which is great btw!

Happy Holidays and I can't wait for more XD

hugs and kisses!
suryasree chapter 2 . 12/27/2009
Gomen ne...didn't feel like logging on...:P


I really like the way u contradicted the usual manga romantic fall break...wid urs it was hillarious at the same time it managed to keep the character's...a job well done...merry chritmas n a happy new year...I hpe we get a new year treat too in form of 3rd chappy..._
thepinkmartini chapter 2 . 12/24/2009
That was an awesome chapter. It was very insightful and introspective. I guess you're really good at getting inside the characters' heads, exploring their thoughts and relaying them to the readers. As for Tokiya, honestly, I found him to be perfectly in character!
Cagalli Yula Athha Fangirl chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
Awesome first chapter! I'm really looking forward to the next one to see where this is going.

Keep up the great work.
Ushinaware Ta Kaze chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
Hey, awesome start! I like the way you started with Tokiya and managed to give such a fine touch on his character. Alot of ppl spoils his nature whilst trying to make him fall for Fuuko.

Can't wait to read your next update.

And how well ou do with Fuuko(cuz ppl screw her character too :()
sOdium nItrate chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
my instructor in logic once told me that if you cannot process any logical answer for a very delicate issue, accepting that it is a miracle would suffice. er, but i doubt it if mi-chan will accept that. harhar! anyhow, just come back from the rehab for too much game addiction. (Group Hug!) i miss fan fiction, and to somehow read a first chapter of a very good multichaptered fic- i died in gone to heaven! i love the way you deliver the story. simple but striking with a bit of humor and of course the spice to make a reader addicted for more!
princess-nami chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
great story continue it! i luv da way u write!
thepinkmartini chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
Great chapter! I like the way you write. It's very introspective.
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