Reviews for Who I seem to be, who I am, who I will become
NaThouDeLiDouX chapter 16 . 8/8

Comme tu peux le constater, je suis Française, j'ai lu Ta Fic et j'Aime beaucoup la Trame de l'Histoire où Tu fais tomber Amoureux Hijiri de Maya mais quel dileme pour Elle !
3 Hommes tombés pour Elle mais Un Seul à Véritablement Son Coeur.
Que va t-il se passer que nous réserves-tu ?

J'espère que tu reprendras ta Plume un de Ces Jours pour ne pas laisser Tes Lecteurs ainsi

Merciii déjà pour ces 16 Chapitres pleins de Suspens !

Bientôt de te lire

Littérairement NaThoU
ElzaDepazie chapter 16 . 3/30/2014
No, you can't ! You can't end on a kiss like that ! NOOOOO !
He KISSED her ! he K...he actually KISSED her OH MY GOD !

The cliffhanger was so powerful and the entire chapter was so captivating I can't believe you are letting us chew on that intefinitely ! Some of your readers have been waiting for 3 years ! I can't believe it! You better have a good reason!


I'm begging you, I need to know what's next...
ElzaDepazie chapter 15 . 3/30/2014
This chapter was so heartbreaking. You really made the panic attack scene realistic and painful to read if I may say so. And the finish the chapter with Yuu's and Ayumi's conversation was a nice move. Loved it, as always...

Now...last chapter ?
Why ?...(want to cry here)
ElzaDepazie chapter 14 . 3/30/2014
KKKKKRRTHRHDAAAAAAAAAA ! You just killed me with your ending ! First the dream - so vivid and intense, I got the chills ! well done - and now this powerful, powerful ending ! You are insane Juniko ! Totally insane. I love it. I just hate to see that there are only 2 chapters left...
ElzaDepazie chapter 13 . 3/30/2014
Oh no's starting. It's on. She now know that he isn't Mr Purple Rose. No...I hate you !
ElzaDepazie chapter 12 . 3/30/2014
I feel the danger...
She is slowly going down the path of both falling in love with him and discovering the truth...and as for me I'm going down a severe case of Second Male Lead Syndrom worthy of the best Kdrama...I hate that I love him. An dI love this fiction. Finally let me add this : how come you're writing is getting even better ? Where will you stop ?
ElzaDepazie chapter 11 . 3/30/2014
Wow this was an impressive chapter ! You really made her search for Jane feel real and intense. Well done Wawadji/Juniko
ElzaDepazie chapter 10 . 3/30/2014
Hijiri is right. They are now in an impossible situation. If Masumi had told Maya about his real identity, she might have accpeted him, but now he made the best memories of her life into jokes, things she is now bound to remember with bitter sadness and anger - that it, the moment she finds out the truth. Silly people.

Your fiction is amazing, and your english is only getting better. Keep writing !
ElzaDepazie chapter 9 . 3/30/2014
So, he isn't so blind after all ! I just hope that this will shake them a little...
ElzaDepazie chapter 8 . 3/30/2014
Jealous...I like it ! but
By the way your english is still not perfect but it really improved a lot! well done !
ElzaDepazie chapter 7 . 3/30/2014
What are you doing to me girl ? Are you really planning on ruining GnK OTP ? Because I'm starting to have a real Second Lead Syndrom right now !
ElzaDepazie chapter 6 . 3/30/2014
So, he's finaly realizing his mistake, uh ? I wonder what he'll do about it now...

Still written in weird english, but the story totally make up for it, it's awesome !
ElzaDepazie chapter 5 . 3/30/2014
Uh-oh...what is Masumi going to do ? He really should pull himself together: wesn't it what he wanted ? but well...
ElzaDepazie chapter 4 . 3/30/2014 now I'm convinced that this is going to be a GREAT fiction. I only discovered Glass Mask a few months ago and I love it and this fiction is simply amazing. Your english isn't perfect but I know you're french and you wrote it 4 years ago I'm sure you've improved by now. I really hopa that if I spam you with reviews you'll eventually come up and write us some more chapters. So I'll keep reading.
ElzaDepazie chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
Bon, je suis française, et je sais que toi aussi, mais je vais lire ta fiction en anglais et écrire mes commentaire en anglais alors. Je ne pensais pas que tu puisse écrire pour Criminal Minds ET pour Garasu no Kamen. Deux univers différents lol.

Bon, j'y vais.

This first chapter was short and not in the best english, but I must say the plot is kindda surprising. I'll read it. I've even heard it went canon recently ? So cool, the dream of all ffwriters I'm sure. You must be over the moon ! If I was you I'd be beside myself. Congrats !
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