lol Phoenix you could have been smart and said your girlfriend likes cologne better then perfume

The story is really funny even if I felt so bad for the poor Phoenix! He reminds me myself when I have to find present and I never know what to buy! I had some embarrassing experience buying Christmas present so I can understand him, even if maybe mine weren’t so embarrassing! I have to confess that there was something scary in the woman who sold the perfume to Phoenix, but I can’t say what…I get worried when you introduce her. I know that something bad was going to happened to my favourite defense attorney and so it was! XD

As always, I love your writing style. You always find the best way to express ideas! And as always I really enjoyed the way you describe and show the feelings that bound the characters! I’d wish I can tell you how much I enjoy your stories but I can’t find the right world in English…so sorry! Keep on writing in this way!

I'm not particularly a fan of Christmas, the whole gift thing, but I actually enjoyed this story. It was written well and I could defiantly see Phoenix doing this in a store. Great job!

I love this so much. Ahahaha, poor Phoenix. All he wanted to do was get a present for Edgeworth! :3

hahaha that was great! poor phoenix, he must be so embarresed after making a fool of himself, but atleast edgeworth got a good laugh out of it.

It was cute. A flurry during the evening, that is how I view the story.

However, one issue that bothered me was how Phoenix is either psychic or just acting ignorant. I speak of how he seems to not notice the sales lady and Miles, yet is able to describe exactly what happen as if he was omniscient. Perhaps it would be better to leave out the descriptions, go into third person, or, in the case of Miles, have Miles hint that he was there in order to show Phoenix's reactions with oomph.

Aw...I was feeling glum, then I've read your fic and it made me smile. Thanks!:D...and Poor Phoenix, having to put up with crowded stores and jokes about his spiky

Aww! Poor Phoenix XD He went through a lot of trouble to find the perfect gift for Miles, hehe! I love that you made Edgeworth see the whole thing, that's so sweet of him to understand and make him feel even more appreciated! I can SO see Phoenix screaming Objection in a store...or anywhere for that matter...if he had enough reason to XD Good job!