Reviews for Whirlwind Effect
EddyxMarvoloxRiddle chapter 5 . 6/30
"Updates about once a week."

...

Seven years later...

Well, it was a nice story, I hope you get back in the game soon. *thumbs up*
pandalarios999 chapter 5 . 5/16
keep going
Guest chapter 5 . 11/29/2016
I read the entire story so far to see if I got better. It didnt, it was overall very confusing and to fast paced.
Reality check chapter 3 . 1/9/2016
Only have one word what you wrote W.T.F
Guest chapter 4 . 6/26/2015
This "Konoha" is very persistent. A good old sucking would help?
werd me chapter 5 . 5/27/2014
Well this could use with some revising because I don't really understand what happened with the kyuubi Its a very interesting story.
saashi samy chapter 5 . 11/27/2013
interesting
i like
saashi samy chapter 2 . 11/26/2013
stupid Rin
AJGuardian chapter 4 . 9/18/2013
I guess he wont, seeing as this hasn't been updated in two years. Are you dead or something, M Tofu?
AJGuardian chapter 5 . 9/18/2013
Oooh, boy. That personality is quite dull...Darui. yeah. Will he regain some of his former light?
Clarilyn chapter 5 . 8/23/2013
?!
Qzh chapter 5 . 4/8/2013
Konoha was awesome, as was her interaction with Mikoto

hoho is Tsunade gonna be in on the harem too?

hope this story gets continued, really find it entertaining
Lemarteskun chapter 5 . 2/21/2013
awesome hope there is more
Glassstar93 chapter 5 . 2/19/2013
Hope you update soon plz! :)
SquiggytheMage chapter 5 . 12/26/2012
good story so far!
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